Teacher— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: You need to improve your grammar and sentence structure to make your answer more natural and clear. For example, use 'focuses' instead of 'focus' and avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly. Also, try to use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ejemplo: My favourite teacher is Miss Christy because she is very approachable and patient. Moreover, she focuses more on practical aspects rather than just theory, which helps me gain deeper insight and better understanding of the lessons.

Sugerencia: Try to use correct prepositions and articles, and improve sentence coherence by using linking words. For example, say 'a campaign' or 'an event' clearly, and connect your ideas with words like 'and' or 'so'. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes like 'good time' should be 'a good time'.

Ejemplo: Recently, she invited me to a campaign where we caught up. We had a good time together, sharing stories about our days, and honestly, I felt more relaxed and calm afterwards.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more concise. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to show cause and effect clearly. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'for me to'.

Ejemplo: Back in JHS, I was not very good at mathematics, so my favourite teacher took time from her busy schedule to help me understand better. Because of her support, I have become one of the best mathematics students in my school.

Sugerencia: Improve your sentence structure and clarity. Instead of 'I'm actually no', say 'No, I don't want to be a teacher'. Also, use linking words like 'however' to connect contrasting ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I am studying geography at university and plan to pursue a career in that field. However, I would love to try teaching as a side job sometime soon.

× She focus more on practical aspects than the theoretical one.

✓ She focuses more on practical aspects than the theoretical ones.

The subject 'She' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'focuses' to agree with the subject. Also, 'aspects' is plural, so 'one' should be plural 'ones' to match.

× She focus more on practical aspects than the theoretical one.

✓ She focuses more on practical aspects than the theoretical ones.

The quantifier 'more' compares plural 'practical aspects' with singular 'theoretical one', which is inconsistent. Both should be plural for correct comparison.

× Recently she called me for us to catch up at a campaign.

✓ Recently she called me for us to catch up at a campaign event.

The word 'campaign' is a noun that usually requires a qualifier like 'event' to specify the place or occasion for meeting.

× We had good time together, we shared some stories and how our day went and honestly I felt more relaxed and calm.

✓ We had a good time together; we shared some stories about how our day went, and honestly, I felt more relaxed and calm.

The sentence lacks articles and proper punctuation. 'Good time' needs the article 'a'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs proper punctuation and conjunctions for clarity.

× she took some time off from her busy days to teach me for me to get better understanding and it's really helped me a lot.

✓ She took some time off from her busy days to teach me so that I could get a better understanding, and it really helped me a lot.

The phrase 'for me to get better understanding' is awkward; 'so that I could get a better understanding' is clearer. Also, 'better understanding' needs the article 'a'.

× she took some time off from her busy days to teach me for me to get better understanding and it's really helped me a lot.

✓ She took some time off from her busy days to teach me so that I could get a better understanding, and it really helped me a lot.

'Better understanding' requires the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× I'm actually no because of the course I chose to do in university, that's geography and the career I want to do when I complete school.

✓ I'm actually not, because of the course I chose to do in university, which is geography, and the career I want to pursue when I complete school.

'I'm actually no' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm actually not'. Also, 'the career I want to do' is better expressed as 'the career I want to pursue'.

× But well in the near future I would love to try teaching as my side job.

✓ But well, in the near future, I would love to try teaching as my side job.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs commas for clarity and natural flow.