Teacher— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，注意冠词和名词单复数的使用，同时避免重复表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, my favourite teacher is Shu Tao. He is one of the best political science teachers in China and very knowledgeable.

Sugerencia: 表达不自然且语法错误较多。建议使用正确的时态和短语，如“keep in touch”，并简化句子结构。

Ejemplo: Actually, I am not still in touch with my primary school teacher because I live far away from my hometown.

Sugerencia: 句子结构不够连贯，时态使用不当。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并注意时态一致。

Ejemplo: I watch his teaching videos on my computer and iPad. His classes are always interesting and he explains complex theories clearly, which helped me pass my postgraduate exam.

Sugerencia: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，简洁明了地表达未来计划。

Ejemplo: Actually, I imagine becoming a political science teacher at a university after I earn my doctoral degree, so I can help more teachers understand political science theory.

× Yes, I have his name Shu Tao and he's one of the best political teacher in China and also knowledgeable man.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher named Shu Tao and he's one of the best political teachers in China and also a knowledgeable man.

这里“teacher”应使用复数形式“teachers”，因为前面用了“one of the best”，表示在多个老师中之一，名词应为复数。同时，“his name Shu Tao”表达不正确，应改为“a teacher named Shu Tao”，更符合英语表达习惯。

× Actually, I'm not still keep touching with my primary school teacher because I'm currently lived as far away with my home.

✓ Actually, I'm not still in touch with my primary school teacher because I currently live far away from my home.

“keep touching”用法错误，正确表达是“in touch”。“lived”时态错误，应为现在时“live”。“as far away with”搭配错误，正确搭配是“far away from”。

× Actually, I watch his teaching video by computer and iPad and his classes are always interesting and explain complex theory clearly, so it helps me to pass the exam of postgraduate.

✓ Actually, I watch his teaching videos on computer and iPad, and his classes are always interesting and explain complex theories clearly, so they help me to pass the postgraduate exam.

“video”应为复数“videos”，因为通常指多个视频。介词“by”用错，应为“on”。“explain”主语是“classes”，应保持复数形式。最后“helps”主语应为复数“they”，指代“classes”。

× Actually, I imagined to be an political science teacher in university when I'm achieved my doctor degree which is makes more teacher to understand the theory of political science.

✓ Actually, I imagine being a political science teacher at a university when I achieve my doctoral degree, which will help more teachers understand the theory of political science.

“imagined”时态错误，应为现在时“imagine”。“to be”后接动名词“being”更自然。冠词“an”后应接元音音素，前面“political”发音以辅音开头，应为“a political”。“I'm achieved”结构错误，应为“I achieve”。“which is makes”语法错误，应为“which will help”。