Teacher— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer and more natural. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a favourite teacher during my school days who taught English. She was very kind and polite, and she always helped us do our best by offering extra classes after school.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, be careful with prepositions and verb forms to sound more natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. Although I lost her contact information when I moved to Canada a year and a half ago, I recently reconnected with her on Instagram.

Sugerencia: Work on grammar, especially verb tenses and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Provide specific examples to make your answer more detailed and coherent.

Ejemplo: My favourite teacher helped me a lot in my studies by providing extra materials and giving additional classes. She explained difficult topics in a simple way, which made learning much easier for me.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use clear and complete sentences to express your ideas. Also, try to explain your reasons more specifically to enrich your answer.

Ejemplo: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because it is not my passion. I prefer to pursue a career in a different field that suits my interests better.

× Yes I have favorite teacher in my school time and she teach us a English subject and she is so kind and polite.

✓ Yes, I had a favorite teacher during my school time and she taught us an English subject and she was so kind and polite.

The sentence has singular and plural issues: 'favorite teacher' is singular, so 'teach' should be 'taught' to match past tense and singular subject. Also, 'a English subject' should be 'an English subject' due to vowel sound. The verb tense is corrected to past tense to match 'school time'.

× She always help us to do our best and even give extra classes after our class.

✓ She always helped us to do our best and even gave extra classes after our class.

The verbs 'help' and 'give' should be in past tense 'helped' and 'gave' to agree with the past time frame indicated by 'school time'.

× I'm still in the touch with my primary school teacher umm, but when I moved to Canada 1 1/2 year ago, at that time I lost the contact information with my teacher, but I met with her on Instagram again.

✓ I'm still in touch with my primary school teacher, but when I moved to Canada 1 1/2 years ago, at that time I lost the contact information of my teacher, but I met her again on Instagram.

The phrase 'in the touch' should be 'in touch'. '1 1/2 year' should be plural '1 1/2 years'. 'Lost the contact information with my teacher' should be 'lost the contact information of my teacher'. 'Met with her' is better as 'met her' in this context.

× My favorite teacher helped me in my studies, she always give me all the solutions of my problems and she always and she also provide me some extra material for my studies and also give me uh, extra classes and explain me all difficult topic in simple.

✓ My favorite teacher helped me in my studies; she always gave me all the solutions to my problems and also provided me with some extra material for my studies, gave me extra classes, and explained all difficult topics in a simple way.

The verbs 'give', 'provide', 'give', and 'explain' should be in past tense 'gave', 'provided', 'gave', and 'explained' to match past time. 'Explain me' is incorrect; it should be 'explained to me' or just 'explained'. 'All difficult topic' should be plural 'all difficult topics'. Added 'in a simple way' for clarity.

× No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because this is not my passion. Uh, I wanted to be. Something different from this field. I think this field is not my kind.

✓ No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because this is not my passion. I want to be something different from this field. I think this field is not my kind.

The sentence 'I wanted to be' should be 'I want to be' to match the present desire. 'This field is not my kind' is incorrect; it should be 'this field is not my kind' is awkward; better is 'this field is not my kind' but since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, this is a semantic issue. However, 'kind' is used incorrectly here; it should be 'kind' replaced with 'type' or 'field' but since it's not in the grammar problem list, it's left as is.