Teacher— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และชัดเจนมากขึ้น รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อนและควรเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหลและเข้าใจง่ายขึ้น

Ejemplo: My favourite teacher is my mother, who was also my first teacher. She taught me many things, including the Quran and important life lessons. She has always treated me with great care and support.

Sugerencia: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น รวมถึงลดคำซ้ำซ้อนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคมีความสมเหตุสมผลและลื่นไหล

Ejemplo: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. Sometimes, we meet for small gatherings to update each other about our lives and to consult on various matters.

Sugerencia: ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำซ้อน รวมถึงเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบมีความสมบูรณ์และน่าสนใจมากขึ้น

Ejemplo: My favourite teacher helped me not only by teaching academic subjects from books but also by guiding me about real-life situations and values.

Sugerencia: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น รวมถึงแสดงความคิดอย่างชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติ

Ejemplo: Currently, I do not want to become a teacher because I am working as an engineer. However, when I was a child, I dreamed of becoming a teacher because I thought it was a noble profession.

× She teach me everything including Quran and life and treat me very.

✓ She teaches me everything including the Quran and life and treats me very well.

The verbs 'teach' and 'treat' need to be in the third person singular form 'teaches' and 'treats' to agree with the singular subject 'She'. Also, 'very' should be followed by an adverb like 'well' to complete the meaning.

× Yes, I still in touch with my family school teacher because sometimes we we meet each other and we make them some small meeting to to to update each other live and consultant each other.

✓ Yes, I am still in touch with my family school teacher because sometimes we meet each other and have small meetings to update each other live and consult each other.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' after 'I' to form the present continuous tense 'I am still in touch'. Also, 'make them some small meeting' is incorrect; it should be 'have small meetings'. The word 'consultant' is a noun; the verb form 'consult' is needed here.

× My teacher is not only help me to to to learn, listen according in a book, but teacher teach me about the the real life.

✓ My teacher not only helps me to learn and listen according to a book, but also teaches me about real life.

The verbs 'help' and 'teach' need to be in the third person singular form 'helps' and 'teaches' to agree with the singular subject 'My teacher'. The phrase 'listen according in a book' is incorrect; it should be 'listen according to a book'. Also, 'the the' is a repetition error.

× For now I don't want to wear AT shirt in the future because my my current work is an engineer but I would like to be a teacher when I was a kid.

✓ For now, I don't want to wear a teacher's shirt in the future because my current job is an engineer, but I wanted to be a teacher when I was a kid.

The phrase 'wear AT shirt' is unclear; it likely means 'wear a teacher's shirt'. 'My my' is a repetition error. 'Work' should be 'job' for clarity. The tense 'would like to be a teacher when I was a kid' is incorrect; it should be 'wanted to be a teacher when I was a kid' to reflect past desire.