Teacher— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和重复，且句子过长导致表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意主谓一致。

Ejemplo: Yes, my favourite teacher is my Senior High School English teacher. She is very kind and patient, and she helped me improve my English skills a lot.

Sugerencia: 表达不够自然，语法错误较多，且回答不够具体。建议使用更简单清晰的句子，直接回答问题并补充具体细节。

Ejemplo: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because we lost contact after I graduated from primary school.

Sugerencia: 回答结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议先明确列出帮助的方式，使用连接词使句子连贯，并补充具体细节。

Ejemplo: My favourite teacher helped me by correcting my papers and teaching me useful skills. Also, we keep in touch on WeChat, so I can ask him questions anytime.

Sugerencia: 回答较为完整，但表达稍显生硬，部分词汇使用不当。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免生硬的词汇搭配。

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely want to be a teacher in the future because it's my life goal. I want to improve my English skills and share my knowledge with students.

× She's really a kind person and he helped me a lot during my English learning and he also have a good temper and whenever I.

✓ She's really a kind person and he helped me a lot during my English learning and he also has a good temper.

句中主语是第三人称单数he，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式has，而不是have。主谓不一致导致语法错误。

× I think I didn't have a lot of touch with her because all of these are, we didn't add any contaction after I graduated from it.

✓ I think I didn't have a lot of contact with her because after I graduated, we didn't keep in touch.

短语应为'have contact with'而非'have a lot of touch with'，且'add any contaction'用词错误，应改为'keep in touch'。介词和词汇使用不当导致表达不清。

× So we didn't contact.

✓ So we didn't contact each other.

动词contact通常需要宾语，缺少宾语导致句子不完整，应补充宾语each other。

× While there are many ways there can help me that, for example during they can help me to correct my papers and to teach me some useful skills.

✓ There are many ways they can help me; for example, they can help me correct my papers and teach me some useful skills.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语的正确搭配，导致句意不明。应调整句子结构，使其通顺。

× And 2nd, we also keep in touch on WeChat and I ask a question. He's really a person.

✓ Secondly, we also keep in touch on WeChat and I ask him questions. He's really a kind person.

原句中代词使用不当，'I ask a question'缺少宾语，且'He's really a person'表达不完整，应补充形容词。

× Well, definitely, because I think it's my life goal and I want to practice my skill, especially English, and I want to accumulate a lot of knowledge which I can impart it to the students in my late life.

✓ Well, definitely, because I think it's my life goal and I want to practice my skills, especially English, and I want to accumulate a lot of knowledge which I can impart to students later in life.

'impart'后不应加宾语代词'it'，且'skill'应为复数'skills'，'late life'表达不自然，应改为'later in life'。模态动词和词汇搭配需注意。