Teacher— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Candidato
Yes, I have a favorite teacher. She is my Chinese teacher. When I was 16 years old, she told me some things and I will remember her forever.
Examinador
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Candidato
No, I don't have touch with my primary school teacher now I have to study and do other things every day and so I don't have time or have opportunity to touch with them.
Examinador
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Candidato
When I was 15 years old, I met some difficult things and my favorite teacher taught me how to deal with it. So I I, I, I like him. I like him.
Examinador
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Candidato
Yes, I want to be a teacher like my favorite teacher. I want to be a history teacher because I like I like history and I think I can did it good, do it good.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复和模糊表达。可以具体说明老师教了什么内容，以及为什么让你难忘。
Ejemplo: Yes, my favourite teacher is my Chinese teacher. When I was 16, she gave me valuable advice about life and learning, which has stayed with me ever since.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的短语如 'in touch with'，并简洁说明原因。
Ejemplo: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because I am very busy with my studies and other activities.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答中有重复且表达不连贯。建议直接说明老师如何帮助你，并用连词连接句子。
Ejemplo: When I was 15, I faced some challenges, and my favourite teacher helped me by giving practical advice on how to overcome them, which I really appreciated.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和重复。建议用正确时态和表达，简洁说明原因。
Ejemplo: Yes, I want to be a history teacher like my favourite teacher because I enjoy history and believe I can teach it well.
Gramática
× When I was 16 years old, she told me some things and I will remember her forever.
✓ When I was 16 years old, she told me some things and I would remember her forever.
这里的句子描述的是过去发生的事情，后半句表达对过去的回忆，应该用过去时态的情态动词'would'，而不是将来时态的'will'。
× No, I don't have touch with my primary school teacher now I have to study and do other things every day and so I don't have time or have opportunity to touch with them.
✓ No, I don't have contact with my primary school teacher now. I have to study and do other things every day, so I don't have time or opportunity to keep in touch with them.
'have touch with'是不正确的表达，正确的搭配是'have contact with'或'keep in touch with'。此外，句子缺少标点符号，导致句子结构混乱。
× When I was 15 years old, I met some difficult things and my favorite teacher taught me how to deal with it.
✓ When I was 15 years old, I encountered some difficulties and my favorite teacher taught me how to deal with them.
'met some difficult things'表达不准确，应该用'encountered some difficulties'。此外，'it'指代不明确，应该用复数'them'指代'difficulties'。
× So I I, I, I like him. I like him.
✓ So I like him.
句子中重复了'I'，属于多余的词语，应删除多余部分使句子简洁。
× I think I can did it good, do it good.
✓ I think I can do it well.
'can did'是错误的时态搭配，情态动词后应接动词原形。'good'用作副词时应改为'well'。
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