Part 1
Examinador
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Candidato
Of course everyone both have their favorite teacher. Take me as an example, my favorite teacher is my English teacher because I am interested in English so I will turn to like a English teacher mostly.
Examinador
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Candidato
No, from primary school graduation to now. I've been a year not to touch with my primary school teacher, but I still remember what she looked like.
Examinador
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Candidato
When I have troubles with study, my teacher always will be able to help me slow my popular without thinking twice. They are very helpful so I love my teacher very much.
Examinador
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Candidato
Not really, my dream is to be an engineer in the future, but I see teacher is also a good job but I'm not interested in it.
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不自然的句子。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并使用正确的语法结构。
Ejemplo: Yes, I do. My favourite teacher is my English teacher because I find English very interesting and she makes the lessons enjoyable.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答应更自然流畅,避免直译和语法错误。建议使用连贯的句子表达时间和记忆。
Ejemplo: No, I haven't been in contact with my primary school teacher since I graduated, but I still remember her appearance clearly.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法和表达错误,建议使用清晰具体的例子说明老师如何帮助自己,并使用连词使句子连贯。
Ejemplo: Whenever I have difficulties with my studies, my teacher helps me patiently and explains things clearly, which makes learning easier for me.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答应更自然,避免重复和语法错误。建议用简洁的句子表达自己的职业理想和对教师职业的看法。
Ejemplo: Not really. My dream is to become an engineer, although I think being a teacher is a good job, it's not something I'm interested in.
× Of course everyone both have their favorite teacher.
✓ Of course everyone has their favorite teacher.
这里的主语是单数everyone,谓语动词应使用单数形式has,而不是复数have。
× I will turn to like a English teacher mostly.
✓ I will tend to like an English teacher mostly.
短语'turn to like'用法不正确,应该用'tend to like'表示倾向于喜欢。冠词'a'前面应使用元音音素的'an'。
× No, from primary school graduation to now. I've been a year not to touch with my primary school teacher, but I still remember what she looked like.
✓ No, since primary school graduation until now, I haven't been in touch with my primary school teacher for a year, but I still remember what she looked like.
表达时间段时应使用正确的时态和介词,'I've been a year not to touch with'结构不正确,应改为'haven't been in touch with'。
× When I have troubles with study, my teacher always will be able to help me slow my popular without thinking twice.
✓ When I have trouble with studying, my teacher is always able to help me solve my problems without thinking twice.
'will be able to'在此处不合适,表示习惯动作应使用一般现在时。'slow my popular'是错误表达,应为'solve my problems'。
× They are very helpful so I love my teacher very much.
✓ She is very helpful so I love my teacher very much.
前文指代单数老师,使用复数代词'they'不正确,应使用单数'she'。
× but I see teacher is also a good job but I'm not interested in it.
✓ but I see teaching is also a good job but I'm not interested in it.
'teacher'是指人,表达职业时应使用动名词'teaching'表示职业。