Teacher— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够自然流畅，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连词连接补充细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, my favourite teacher is my Chinese teacher in high school. She is very kind and knowledgeable, and she always shares interesting stories besides teaching Chinese language.

Sugerencia: 表达基本清楚，但用词和语法有误，句子稍显冗长。建议使用更准确的表达，注意时态和词汇搭配。

Ejemplo: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teachers because it has been a long time, and most of them have retired.

Sugerencia: 回答重复且不够具体，缺少连贯的连接词。建议用连词连接句子，并具体说明老师如何帮助你。

Ejemplo: She helped me improve my writing skills because I used to perform poorly. For example, she gave me extra exercises and useful feedback.

Sugerencia: 句子结构混乱，表达不完整，语法错误较多。建议简化表达，明确说明原因，并使用连词使句子连贯。

Ejemplo: No, I don't want to be a teacher because I believe teachers need great patience and knowledge. However, I tend to get impatient and I feel my knowledge is not enough.

× She is kind and knowledgeable person and she always teaches me a lot except on the Chinese knowledge for example her personal.

✓ She is a kind and knowledgeable person and she always teaches me a lot, not only about Chinese knowledge but also about her personal experiences.

此句中缺少冠词“a”，导致单数名词“person”前缺少限定词，属于单复数问题。应在“person”前加“a”表示单数。

× except on the Chinese knowledge for example her personal.

✓ not only about Chinese knowledge but also about her personal experiences.

“except on”用法不当，表达应为“不仅关于……，还关于……”，应使用“not only... but also...”结构，且“Chinese knowledge”前应使用介词“about”。

× No I'm not, I just lose the touch with them because primary school is too remote for me and most of my primary school teachers are retired so I lose contact with them.

✓ No, I'm not. I just lost touch with them because primary school is too far away for me and most of my primary school teachers are retired, so I lost contact with them.

“lose the touch”应为“lose touch”，且时态应与上下文一致，使用过去时“lost”。“primary school is too remote”表达不自然，改为“too far away”。

× I just lose the touch with them because primary school is too remote for me and most of my primary school teachers are retired so I lose contact with them.

✓ I just lost touch with them because primary school is too far away for me and most of my primary school teachers are retired, so I lost contact with them.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去时态，“lose”应改为“lost”。

× I remember I did poor in writing and she helped me a lot with my writing and she is my Chinese teacher.

✓ I remember I did poorly in writing and she helped me a lot with my writing; she was my Chinese teacher.

“did poor”应为副词形式“did poorly”，且后半句描述过去的老师身份，时态应为过去时“was”。

× I remember I did poor in writing and she helped me a lot with my writing and she is my Chinese teacher.

✓ I remember I did poorly in writing and she helped me a lot with my writing; she was my Chinese teacher.

“poor”是形容词，修饰动词时应使用副词“poorly”。

× No, I don't want to be a teacher because I think teacher should own a. Great patience and knowledge but I'm just such person that are easy to get impatient and I think my knowledge.

✓ No, I don't want to be a teacher because I think a teacher should have great patience and knowledge, but I'm just the kind of person who is easy to get impatient and I think my knowledge is limited.

“should own a. Great patience”表达错误，应为“should have great patience”。“such person that are”应为“the kind of person who is”，主谓一致错误。句子不完整，补充完整表达。