Teacher— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Also, make your answer more natural by combining sentences and adding a reason with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, my favorite teacher is my mom because she teaches social studies, and she always explains things clearly, which helps me understand the subject better.

Sugerencia: Use correct grammar and vocabulary, and avoid awkward phrases like 'didn't touch with them'. Also, organize your answer logically with linking words.

Ejemplo: No, after I graduated from high school, I contacted all my primary school teachers to share my good results, but since then, I have not kept in touch with them.

Sugerencia: Focus on correct verb forms and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how the teacher helped you.

Ejemplo: My favorite teacher was my Arabic teacher, and he helped me develop a love for the language. Although I didn't like Arabic much before, he inspired me to admire it because it is my native language.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to show contrast and explain your current goals clearly.

Ejemplo: When I was younger, I dreamed of becoming a teacher, but recently I joined the Faculty of Economics and Political Science, so now my dream is to become an ambassador of Egypt instead.

× Yes, my favorite teacher is my mom because my mom teach social studies.

✓ Yes, my favorite teacher is my mom because my mom teaches social studies.

The verb 'teach' should be in the third person singular form 'teaches' to agree with the singular subject 'my mom'. In English, verbs in the present tense add 's' or 'es' when the subject is third person singular.

× So my favorite teacher definitely will be my mom.

✓ So my favorite teacher will definitely be my mom.

The adverb 'definitely' should be placed between the modal verb 'will' and the main verb 'be' for correct word order in English modal verb constructions.

× No, after I succeeded in the high school, I called the every teacher and a informing them that I get a high score.

✓ No, after I succeeded in high school, I called every teacher and informed them that I got a high score.

The verb 'informing' should be in past tense 'informed' to match the past tense context. Also, 'a informing' is incorrect; 'informing' is a verb, not a noun. 'Get' should be 'got' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I called the every teacher and a informing them that I get a high score.

✓ I called every teacher and informed them that I got a high score.

The article 'the' before 'every teacher' is incorrect; 'every' already implies all members of a group and does not need 'the'. Also, 'a informing' is incorrect; 'informing' is a verb and should not have an article.

× And then I didn't touch with them anymore.

✓ And then I didn't keep in touch with them anymore.

The verb 'touch' is not used with the preposition 'with' in this context. The correct phrase is 'keep in touch with' to express maintaining contact.

× My favorite teacher was an Arabic teacher and the he helped me by make made Mia Love the Arabic language.

✓ My favorite teacher was an Arabic teacher and he helped me by making me love the Arabic language.

The phrase 'the he' is incorrect; 'the' should be removed. 'Make made Mia Love' is incorrect; the correct form is 'making me love' to express causation with the verb 'help'.

× I wasn't love Arabic that far but he made me to admire this language because it's my native language.

✓ I didn't love Arabic that much, but he made me admire this language because it's my native language.

'Wasn't love' is incorrect; the correct negative past tense is 'didn't love'. 'That far' should be 'that much' to express degree. 'Made me to admire' should be 'made me admire' as 'make' is followed by the base verb without 'to'.

× When I was younger that was my dream, but now or a recently and I joined the faculty of Economics and Political science.

✓ When I was younger, that was my dream, but now recently I have joined the faculty of Economics and Political Science.

The phrase 'now or a recently' is incorrect; it should be 'now recently'. 'Joined' should be in present perfect 'have joined' to indicate a recent action relevant to the present.

× So my dream job is to be an ambassador of Egypt, not to be a teacher.

✓ So my dream job is to be an ambassador of Egypt, not a teacher.

The phrase 'not to be a teacher' is awkward; omitting 'to be' after 'not' makes the sentence clearer and more natural.