Birthday— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể về những hoạt động bạn thường làm vào ngày sinh nhật để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: On my birthday, I usually spend time with my family and friends. We often have a small party at home and enjoy delicious food together.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi về những hoạt động bạn đã làm khi còn nhỏ, không chỉ nói về sở thích ăn bánh và kẹo. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ejemplo: When I was young, I usually celebrated my birthday by eating ice cream cake and sharing candies with my friends. It was always a joyful time.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu chi tiết. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng tại sao ngày sinh nhật quan trọng với bạn, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm lý do cụ thể để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is important because it is a special day to reflect on the past year and spend time with loved ones.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm lý do tại sao bạn cho rằng sinh nhật của bố mẹ là quan trọng nhất để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

Ejemplo: In China, I believe the most important birthdays to celebrate are those of my parents because they have done so much for the family.

× Every birthday I wish I had traveled around Vietnam because I like see new thing and and. And.

✓ Every birthday I wish I had traveled around Vietnam because I like seeing new things.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'seeing' to indicate enjoyment of an activity. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context of multiple new experiences.

× Every birthday I wish I had traveled around Vietnam because I like see new thing and and. And.

✓ Every birthday I wish I had traveled around Vietnam because I like seeing new things.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple new experiences or items.

× Every birthday I wish I had traveled around Vietnam because I like see new thing and and. And.

✓ Every birthday I wish I had traveled around Vietnam because I like seeing new things.

The repeated conjunction 'and and. And.' is incorrect and unnecessary; it should be removed for clarity and correctness.

× I like ice cake and and it's candy because I very like candy. I like sweet.

✓ I like ice cake and candy because I really like candy. I like sweets.

The phrase 'very like' is incorrect; 'really like' is the correct adverbial phrase. Also, 'sweet' should be plural 'sweets' when referring to candies in general.

× I like ice cake and and it's candy because I very like candy. I like sweet.

✓ I like ice cake and candy because I really like candy. I like sweets.

The repeated 'and and' is incorrect and should be corrected to a single 'and'.

× Yes. Celebrate birthday is a is a day special because it.

✓ Yes. Celebrating a birthday is a special day because of it.

The sentence lacks proper structure and clarity. 'Celebrate birthday' should be 'Celebrating a birthday' to function as a noun phrase. Also, 'is a is a day special' is incorrect and should be 'is a special day'. The phrase 'because it' is incomplete and should be clarified or removed.

× I think birthday important to celebrate in China is birthday my mom and my dad.

✓ I think the most important birthdays to celebrate in China are my mom's and my dad's.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing articles. 'Birthday important to celebrate' should be 'the most important birthdays to celebrate'. Also, possessive forms 'my mom's' and 'my dad's' are needed to indicate whose birthdays.