Birthday— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use the present simple tense consistently when talking about habitual actions, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with connectors like 'for example' or 'such as'.

Ejemplo: I usually celebrate my birthday by going out with friends. For example, we often have dinner together and sometimes go shopping. I really enjoy spending time with them on that special day.

Sugerencia: Focus on using correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words like 'first', 'then', and 'after that' to organize your answer logically. Also, be more specific about the activities you did.

Ejemplo: When I was young, my father usually arranged a birthday party for me. First, I invited my friends to the party. Then, after the party, I went out for dinner with my family.

Sugerencia: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Start with a clear opinion, then explain your reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'since'. Avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it is important to celebrate my birthday because it marks the day I was born. Also, it is special for my mother since she became a mother on that day. Celebrating makes me feel special and appreciated.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating phrases and uncertainty. Give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your thoughts.

Ejemplo: I believe children's birthdays are the most important to celebrate in China because they mark important milestones in their growth. Families often organize parties to make children feel loved and special.

× I used to excited a lot and my father arranged a party for me.

✓ I used to get excited a lot and my father arranged a party for me.

The verb 'excited' is an adjective and cannot be used directly after 'used to' without a verb. The correct verb form is 'get excited' to express the action of becoming excited.

× After that sometime I took my family for any dinner or lunch like that.

✓ After that, sometimes I took my family out for dinner or lunch like that.

The phrase 'for any dinner or lunch' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'out' to indicate going somewhere to eat, and 'sometimes' should be used instead of 'sometime' to indicate frequency.

× According to me it it probably yes because I think on that day I born my mother become officially mother and it's her birthday as well As a mother.

✓ According to me, it is probably yes because I think on that day I was born, my mother officially became a mother and it's her birthday as well as a mother.

The verb 'born' needs to be in the past tense form 'was born' to indicate a past event. Also, 'become' should be in past tense 'became' to match the past event. The sentence also needs commas for clarity.

× I love my birthday because it makes me feel like I'm a special on that day.

✓ I love my birthday because it makes me feel like I'm special on that day.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'special' which is an adjective here. 'Special' does not need an article in this context.

× So it it, it might be or it might be not.

✓ So it might be or it might not be.

The sentence has redundant 'it' and incorrect word order in 'might be not'. The correct form is 'might not be' and redundant words should be removed for clarity.