Birthday— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo bhag ma grammar ra sentence structure ma galti haru chan. Tapai le prashna ko jawab sidha ra spashta rup ma dinu parcha. Tapai le linking words jastai 'then', 'after that' ko prayog garnu bhayeko cha tara sentence haru adhura ra asamarthit chan. Tapai le sentence haru lai thulo ra spashta banau, ra thulo sentence haru lai chhoto ra prabhavit banau.

Ejemplo: On my birthday, I usually wake up early and brush my teeth. Then, I take a shower and worship God. After that, I have breakfast with my family. Finally, I go outside with my friends to celebrate.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra clarity ko samasya cha. Tapai le prashna ko jawab sidha dinu parcha ra sentence haru lai thulo ra spashta banau. Tapai le linking words jastai 'when', 'so' ko prayog garnu parcha ra sentence haru lai logical banau. Tapai le specific details jastai kasto celebration gareko thiyo, kina chocolate diye jasto kura samet sametnu parcha.

Ejemplo: When I was young, I used to celebrate my birthday at school with my friends. I would give chocolates to them as a gift. We enjoyed the day by playing games and sharing snacks.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma clarity ra grammar ko samasya cha. Tapai le prashna ko jawab sidha ra spashta dinu parcha. Tapai le apno opinion ra karan haru spashta ra logical rup ma prastut garnu parcha. Linking words jastai 'because', 'so' ko prayog garnu parcha ra sentence haru lai prabhavit banau.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is very important for me to celebrate my birthday because it reminds me of my life and achievements. I feel grateful for everything I have, so I like to celebrate this special day.

Sugerencia: Tapai le prashna bujhna garo bhayeko jasto cha. Tapai le prashna bujhna ko lagi dhyan dinu parcha ra yadi bujhna garo bhayo bhane, spashta rup ma sodhna saknu parcha. Tapai le prashna ko jawab dinu parcha ra apno opinion ra karan haru sametnu parcha.

Ejemplo: I am not sure, but I think the most important birthday to celebrate in China is the Chinese New Year, which is a big festival for everyone.

× Well in my body I early wake up and I brush my teeth, take a shower.

✓ Well, I usually wake up early and brush my teeth, then take a shower.

The phrase 'in my body' is incorrect and unnecessary here. The verb 'wake up' should be in the present simple tense to describe habitual actions. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; adding 'usually' clarifies the habitual nature, and connecting actions with 'then' improves flow.

× After that worship God.

✓ After that, I worship God.

The original sentence lacks a subject 'I', which is necessary for a complete sentence. Adding the subject corrects the sentence structure.

× After that I eat some breakfast with my family and after that I will. Go with my friends outside.

✓ After that, I eat some breakfast with my family, and then I go outside with my friends.

The use of 'will' is incorrect here because the speaker is describing habitual actions, so present simple tense should be used. Also, the sentence is fragmented; combining the parts improves clarity.

× Well, when I was young, I study in school level, so I will certainly, but with my friends in school.

✓ Well, when I was young, I studied at school, and I certainly spent time with my friends there.

The verb 'study' should be in past tense 'studied' to match the past time frame. The phrase 'school level' is unclear and replaced with 'at school' for clarity. 'I will certainly' is incorrect in past context; it is corrected to 'I certainly spent time'.

× I give a chocolates for them and these are also.

✓ I gave chocolates to them, and these were also appreciated.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used with the plural noun 'chocolates'. It should be omitted. Also, the verb tense is changed to past to match the context. The phrase 'these are also' is unclear and rephrased for clarity.

× Ah, yes. Uh, is it is in putting for me because up this day.

✓ Ah, yes. It is important for me because on this day,

The original sentence is unclear and contains grammatical errors. 'Is it is in putting' is incorrect and corrected to 'It is important'. 'Up this day' is corrected to 'on this day' to use the correct preposition.

× I came from RNI, saw everything after liking so it's important for me.

✓ I was born in RNI and have experienced many things since then, so it's important for me.

The phrase 'I came from RNI' is ambiguous; 'I was born in RNI' is clearer. 'Saw everything after liking' is unclear and corrected to 'have experienced many things since then' to convey the intended meaning.

× I I don't know then question, can you repeat me?

✓ I don't understand the question, can you repeat it for me?

The phrase 'then question' should be 'the question'. 'Repeat me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'repeat it for me' to refer to the question.