Birthday— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để câu trả lời mạch lạc và dễ hiểu.

Ejemplo: On my birthday, I usually spend the morning and afternoon with my friends. In the evening, I have a small gathering with my family. I enjoy celebrating with both friends and relatives because it makes the day special.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý đến cấu trúc câu và từ vựng để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc, đồng thời cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về kỷ niệm.

Ejemplo: When I was a child, my parents usually organized a birthday party for me at a fried chicken restaurant. My friends and I ate delicious food and danced together. I really cherish these happy memories.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lộn xộn và thiếu rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý tưởng hợp lý hơn. Hãy giải thích rõ lý do tại sao bạn thấy việc tổ chức sinh nhật quan trọng.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it is important to celebrate my birthday because it is a special time to be with my family and close relatives. I appreciate these moments and always look forward to celebrating with them.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc tốt hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy giải thích lý do tại sao bạn nghĩ sinh nhật mẹ là quan trọng nhất và tránh những câu không rõ nghĩa.

Ejemplo: I am not very familiar with birthdays in China, but I think the most important birthday to celebrate is the mother's birthday. Mothers give us life and raise us, so it is important to honor and celebrate them on their special day.

× On my birthday, I planned to do a lot of things.

✓ On my birthday, I plan to do a lot of things.

The sentence is about a habitual action or future intention, so the present tense 'plan' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'planned'.

× In the morning and afternoon and then I in the evening I will spend my 10 gathering with my. Families and related.

✓ In the morning and afternoon, and then in the evening, I will spend my time gathering with my family and relatives.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear phrasing. '10 gathering' is unclear and likely a typo. 'Families and related' should be 'family and relatives'. Proper punctuation and word order improve clarity.

× I my birthday when I was a child I usually have a pretty party.

✓ On my birthday when I was a child, I usually had a pretty party.

The sentence lacks a preposition 'On' at the beginning and uses present tense 'have' instead of past tense 'had' to match the past time frame 'when I was a child'.

× My parents used to organize and party party for me with my friends at a chicken fried chicken shops and we ate and danced together.

✓ My parents used to organize a party for me with my friends at a fried chicken shop, and we ate and danced together.

The phrase 'and party party' is incorrect and redundant. 'Chicken fried chicken shops' is incorrect; it should be 'fried chicken shop'. The conjunction 'and' is used correctly to connect clauses.

× It specially my family and related because they are the closer people of May, so I really appreciate and look forward them.

✓ Especially my family and relatives, because they are the closest people to me, so I really appreciate and look forward to them.

'It specially' is incorrect; 'Especially' should start the sentence. 'Related' should be 'relatives'. 'Closer people of May' is incorrect; it should be 'closest people to me'. The verb 'look forward' requires the preposition 'to' before the object.

× So I really look forward them to celebrate my birthday.

✓ So I really look forward to them celebrating my birthday.

The phrase 'look forward them to celebrate' is incorrect. The correct form is 'look forward to' followed by a gerund ('them celebrating').

× Actually I don't know much in the field but it for me I think the most important birthday to celebrate in China is mother birthday.

✓ Actually, I don't know much about the field, but for me, I think the most important birthday to celebrate in China is mother's birthday.

The phrase 'know much in the field' should be 'know much about the field'. 'Mother birthday' should be possessive 'mother's birthday'. Commas improve sentence clarity.

× For me mom is the person who gave birth to an raised me to embrace me.

✓ For me, mom is the person who gave birth to me and raised me to embrace me.

The phrase 'gave birth to an raised me' is incorrect; it should be 'gave birth to me and raised me'. Comma after 'For me' improves readability.

× So I think she eat desert a minimum birthday.

✓ So I think she deserves a memorable birthday.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words: 'eat desert a minimum birthday' is nonsensical. The intended meaning is likely 'she deserves a memorable birthday'.