Breakfast— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence stating what you usually eat, then give one or two specific supporting details (why you choose it and how often). Avoid filler words and repeated phrases, and keep it to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually eat an egg sandwich for breakfast. I choose it because it is quick to make and keeps me full until lunch. I often have it on weekdays when I am in a hurry.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and explain the reason with one clear example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect reason and result. Remove hesitation and vague phrases; say how breakfast affects you specifically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think breakfast is important because it gives me energy and improves concentration. For example, when I skipped breakfast in high school I felt tired in morning lessons, so now I always eat something to stay focused.

Sugerencia: Give a clear comparison with specific details and a linking phrase like 'when I was a child' vs 'now'. Limit to 2–3 sentences: one stating the difference and one giving a specific example of how routines changed.

Ejemplo: Yes, mornings are different now. When I was a child I could wake up late and my parents prepared everything, but now I wake up earlier to prepare my own meals and get ready for work or school.

Sugerencia: Give a direct yes/no, then explain briefly. If you are satisfied, say why and give one specific routine detail. Avoid unclear words and unnecessary hesitations. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I would not like to change it because I am happy with my current routine. I usually wake up an hour early to prepare my lunch and a quick breakfast, which helps me feel energized for the day.

× Umm, I'm a racy person, uh, therefore I usually eat my breakfast, my for uh, the egg sandwich for my breakfast.

✓ Umm, I'm an active person; therefore I usually eat an egg sandwich for breakfast.

The student used 'racy' incorrectly; 'active' fits meaning. Article use: 'an egg sandwich' and omit redundant 'my breakfast'. Also 'an' before vowel sound. Improve by choosing correct adjective and simplifying noun phrases.

× It is easy to cook and also the rest of is not not difficult because I'm not strongest to research the issue.

✓ It is easy to cook and the rest is not difficult because I'm not very good at researching the issue.

Original has unclear structure and repeated negatives. 'Not strongest to research' is ungrammatical; use 'not very good at researching'. Avoid double negatives and use correct adjective with 'at' + gerund.

× To illustrate this, when I was in high school, I didn't have a breakfast very well because of, umm, because of, uh, urgent.

✓ To illustrate, when I was in high school, I didn't eat breakfast regularly because of urgent situations.

'Have a breakfast' is nonnative; use 'eat breakfast' and 'very well' incorrect here. 'Because of urgent' needs a noun: 'urgent situations'. Use adverb 'regularly' to express frequency.

× Yeah. Uh, nowadays I try to eat breakfast, uh, to use my head.

✓ Nowadays I try to eat breakfast to use my brain.

'Use my head' is informal but acceptable; 'brain' is clearer. No present participle error actually, but cleaned wording. The intent is to express purpose: 'to use my brain'.

× Yes, it's totally different now. I have become become adults and my breakfast habit also my daily habit has changed to responsible to be responsible for myself.

✓ Yes, it's totally different now. I have become an adult and my breakfast and daily habits have changed because I am now responsible for myself.

'Become adults' mismatches subject; singular 'I' requires 'an adult'. 'Habit also my daily habit' is redundant. Use plural 'habits have changed' for compound subject. Use clear clause 'because I am now responsible'.

× Yeah, I I think that I'm going to be mature to deal with.

✓ I think that I will be mature enough to deal with it.

'Going to be mature to deal with' is awkward. Use 'will be mature enough to deal with it' to express future capability. Include object 'it'.

× Uh, no, I'm, uh, I'm very satisfied to, for my morning Latino holidays, uh, usually I woke up, uh, one hours ago to, before going to the school because I need to prepare my lunch meal, my lunch meal to get energy and.

✓ No, I'm very satisfied with my morning routine. Usually I wake up one hour early before going to school because I need to prepare my lunch to get energy.

'Satisfied to, for' should be 'satisfied with'. 'Latino holidays' likely wrong; replaced with 'routine'. 'Woke up one hours ago' wrong tense and number: use 'wake up one hour early'. 'To the school' -> 'to school'. Remove redundant 'my lunch meal' and finish sentence.