Internet— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), correct tense and articles, and give one specific supporting detail. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I first used the internet when I was in high school. Back then it was rare in my town, so I mainly accessed it at school to do research and send emails.

Sugerencia: Give a direct frequency statement, reduce repetition, and provide a specific example using linking words (e.g., because, for example). Keep to 2 sentences.

Ejemplo: I go online several times a day, in fact I'm connected for most of the day because I use my smartphone for work and social media. For example, I check emails in the morning and use apps throughout the day.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, use past tense correctly, and add a clear reason with a brief example. Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes. When I first started using the internet in high school, my parents limited my access because they were worried about online risks. For example, they only allowed me to use it for homework under supervision.

Sugerencia: Give a direct opinion, use clear reasons and a specific countermeasure. Avoid hesitation and grammar errors; keep it to 2–3 sentences with linking words such as because and however.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do spend too much time online because many tasks and entertainment are digital. However, I try to reduce screen time by exercising and reading for an hour each evening.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear statement about how you would cope, then give 1–2 specific activities you would do instead. Fix grammar and avoid repetition; use linking words like for example or instead.

Ejemplo: I would find alternative ways to manage tasks without the internet, for example by visiting banks in person and calling friends. I would also spend more time reading, exercising, or pursuing hobbies like cooking.

× Actually, uh, I think when I was, uh, at a high school, uh, it's the first time that I, uh, used Internet, uh, and uh, in that days, the Internet is not common as, uh, nowadays And uh, we use Internet very loud and tough.

✓ Actually, I think when I was in high school, it was the first time that I used the Internet, and in those days the Internet was not as common as it is nowadays, and we used the Internet a lot.

Errors: incorrect article use before 'high school' and 'Internet', wrong demonstrative 'that' and tense consistency. Suggestions: Use 'in high school' (no 'a'), use 'the Internet' with definite article, change 'it's the first time that I used' to 'it was the first time that I used' for past reference, use 'in those days' for plural past, and 'was not as common as it is nowadays' for correct comparison and tense. Replace 'use...very loud and tough' with 'used the Internet a lot' for natural phrasing.

× I think that nowadays we are online all of the most of the day because we do everything with Internet and we should be online most of the time and this is very important for us, especially with our smartphone.

✓ I think that nowadays we are online for most of the day because we do everything on the Internet and we are online most of the time; this is very important for us, especially because of our smartphones.

Errors: awkward phrase 'all of the most of the day', missing preposition with 'Internet', pronoun/possessive and verb choice. Suggestions: Use 'for most of the day' to indicate duration, use 'on the Internet', use 'because of our smartphones' or 'with our smartphones', and maintain present simple 'we are online'.

× Yes, I actually at the first time and in high school when I start to use Internet. The Internet is not common as today's and it's not familiar to my parents, so my parents sometimes didn't allow me to use Internet very much.

✓ Yes, actually at first in high school when I started to use the Internet. The Internet was not as common as it is today and it was not familiar to my parents, so my parents sometimes did not allow me to use the Internet much.

Errors: incorrect verb tense 'start' should be past 'started', inconsistent tense 'is not common as today's' should be past 'was not as common as it is today', and article use with 'the Internet'. Suggestions: Keep past tense when referring to past events, use 'did not' (or didn't) for past negative, and include 'the' before Internet.

× Actually, yes, because of the fast development of using Internet in nowadays I it's we, we have to use Internet very much and but I try to use Internet not much and I try to more exercise or read books.

✓ Actually, yes. Because of the rapid development of the Internet nowadays, we have to use the Internet a lot, but I try not to use it too much and I try to exercise more or read books.

Errors: awkward noun phrase 'development of using Internet', wrong article use, word order 'I it's we, we', and incorrect placement of 'not much'. Suggestions: Use 'the Internet', 'rapid' or 'fast development of the Internet', maintain present simple 'we have to', and restructure negatives to 'try not to use it too much'; place 'exercise more' after 'try to'.

× Actually, it's uh, very difficult to imagine uh, the day without Internet because uh, most of the, our activity in the uh, in the day is related to the Internet and without Internet is very difficult to continue our daily life such as banking, social media or connect to the.

✓ Actually, it's very difficult to imagine a day without the Internet because most of our daily activities are related to the Internet, and without it it would be very difficult to continue aspects of daily life such as banking, using social media, or staying connected.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'day', missing 'the' before 'Internet', awkward noun phrases 'most of the, our activity in the uh, in the day', incorrect verb agreement and sentence fragment 'connect to the.' Suggestions: Use 'a day' and 'the Internet', use plural 'activities' with plural verb 'are', and complete the list with gerunds 'banking, using social media, or staying connected'. Also use conditional 'would be' for hypothetical situations if preferred, but present simple 'is' can work; here 'would be' reads more natural.