Internet— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复使用“umm”，并且注意时态和主谓一致。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节丰富内容。

Ejemplo: I started using the internet when I was quite young. At that time, I had my own gadget and often watched movies online. I also browsed interesting news about daily life. Nowadays, I enjoy browsing TikTok for entertainment.

Sugerencia: 回答中表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议直接回答问题，使用清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使内容连贯。避免使用不确定的表达，如“it's can I count”。

Ejemplo: I go online every day, several times a day. I enjoy browsing information on the internet and chatting with friends on social media platforms.

Sugerencia: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，建议使用正确的时态和简洁的句子表达。可以先直接回答问题，再补充具体细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember a time when I was preparing for exams. My mother took away my gadget to help me focus on studying, so I wasn't allowed to use the internet then.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较为笼统且句子结构复杂，建议简化表达，使用具体原因和结果，并注意句子完整性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think I spend too much time online. With the rapid development of technology, many young people, including me, use their phones a lot, which can have negative effects on our health and social life.

Sugerencia: 回答较为完整，但有语法错误和重复表达，建议注意句子结构和用词准确，避免重复。

Ejemplo: Without the internet, I would spend more time hanging out with my friends after finishing my homework. We would play board games together, which would help strengthen our relationships.

× So when I was still young I already having my own gadget so I usually will umm like watching some movie on it and also will browse in the Internet which umm only there is a lot of interesting news about all my daily life and right now I also umm found in browsing the TikTok.

✓ So when I was still young I already had my own gadget so I usually would umm like watching some movies on it and also would browse the Internet which umm has a lot of interesting news about my daily life and right now I also umm found browsing TikTok.

句中“already having”用法错误，应该用过去时态“had”表示过去拥有；“will umm like watching”应改为“would like watching”表示过去习惯；“browse in the Internet”中介词“in”用错，应去掉；“only there is a lot”结构不正确，应改为“has a lot”；“found in browsing”结构错误，应改为“found browsing”。这些错误涉及动词形式和介词使用。

× So every day I'm using my SO, the time I'm browsing some online information is like many times it's can I count? So it's really having a fun on browsing that kind of information in the Internet and also having some SOS social media like chatting.

✓ So every day I'm using my phone, the time I'm browsing some online information is like many times, can I count? So it's really fun browsing that kind of information on the Internet and also using some social media like chatting.

“it's can I count?”结构不正确，情态动词“can”用法错误，应改为“can I count?”；“having a fun”应改为“it's really fun”；“having some SOS social media”表达不清，应改为“using some social media”；“in the Internet”介词用错，应改为“on the Internet”。这些错误涉及情态动词和介词使用。

× So it is the time I was completing my exam and I would I need to practice the lessons on diverse courses. So that time my mom kept my gadget and it is the time I didn't allowed to use the Internet.

✓ So it was the time I was completing my exam and I needed to practice the lessons on various courses. So at that time my mom kept my gadget and I was not allowed to use the Internet.

“it is the time”应改为过去时“it was the time”；“I would I need”结构错误，应改为“I needed”；“diverse courses”用词不当，应改为“various courses”；“didn't allowed”错误，助动词“did”后应用动词原形“allow”，改为“was not allowed”。这些错误涉及过去时态和动词形式。

× Yes, because due to the development of the informational technology nowadays a lot of young generation are having a lot of time using their phone and also like browsing on the Internet which also will cause some negative effect on them so.

✓ Yes, because due to the development of information technology nowadays a lot of the young generation spend a lot of time using their phones and also browsing the Internet which also causes some negative effects on them.

“informational technology”应为“information technology”；“a lot of young generation”应为“a lot of the young generation”；“are having a lot of time”表达不当，应为“spend a lot of time”；“using their phone”应为复数“phones”；“some negative effect”应为复数“some negative effects”；“like browsing on the Internet”中“like”多余，应去掉。涉及量词和名词单复数。

× So I will hang out with my friends every time I finish my homework and also I will try to play some table game with my friends which can also strengthen my our relationship together.

✓ So I will hang out with my friends every time I finish my homework and also I will try to play some table games with my friends which can also strengthen our relationship.

“some table game”应为复数“some table games”；“my our relationship”中“my”多余，应去掉；“strengthen our relationship together”中“together”多余，关系已经表达清楚。涉及代词使用和名词复数。