Internet— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use correct tense and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: I started using the internet after I completed my 12th standard. My parents bought me a new iPhone, and I installed Instagram, which I used the most at that time.

Sugerencia: Use simpler linking words and clearer sentence structure. Begin with a direct answer, then add specific reasons with appropriate linking words.

Ejemplo: I don't go online very often because of my busy schedule. However, I usually go online two or three times a week to talk with my close friends and work on assignments.

Sugerencia: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct tense. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember a time when my mother scolded me for using the internet too much. It was just two days before my exam, and I got poor results. Both my teacher and parents were upset with me.

Sugerencia: Use simpler phrases and clearer linking words. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific examples and reasons.

Ejemplo: I don't think I spend too much time online because I know websites like Instagram and WhatsApp can waste a lot of time. Instead, I prefer reading books and novels to improve my knowledge.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more coherent by using proper linking words and clearer sentence structure. Provide specific activities you would do without the internet.

Ejemplo: Without the internet, life would be quite lonely because technology is very important today. However, I would spend my time studying novels and reading old books.

× I start using the Internet when I completed my 12 standard owning as far as my parents purchase a new iPhone to me and that time I install Instagram whereas I use Internet that time the most.

✓ I started using the Internet when I completed my 12th standard because my parents purchased a new iPhone for me, and at that time I installed Instagram and used the Internet the most.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'Start' should be in past tense 'started' to match 'completed'. 'Purchase' should be 'purchased' to indicate past action. 'Install' should be 'installed' and 'use' should be 'used' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'owning as far as' is incorrect and replaced with 'because'. This correction ensures proper past tense usage and clearer meaning.

× I start using the Internet when I completed my 12 standard owning as far as my parents purchase a new iPhone to me and that time I install Instagram whereas I use Internet that time the most.

✓ I started using the Internet when I completed my 12th standard because my parents purchased a new iPhone for me, and at that time I installed Instagram and used the Internet the most.

The phrase 'purchase a new iPhone to me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' as in 'purchased a new iPhone for me'. Also, 'owning as far as' is not a correct phrase and is replaced with 'because' to express reason.

× Due to my hectic schedule recently, nevertheless, I don't prefer going online as much as possible, but almost two or three times.

✓ Due to my hectic schedule recently, I don't prefer going online as much as possible; I go online almost two or three times.

The use of 'nevertheless' is incorrect here as it contradicts the previous phrase without a proper connection. Also, 'don't prefer going online as much as possible' is awkward; it is better to say 'I don't prefer going online as much as possible' and clarify frequency. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct modal usage.

× I usually go online to talk with my close friends for the study purpose and for assignments.

✓ I usually go online to talk with my close friends for study purposes and assignments.

The phrase 'for the study purpose' is incorrect; it should be 'for study purposes' without 'the' and in plural form to indicate general purpose. Also, 'for assignments' is correct but better paired with 'study purposes' for parallel structure.

× Yes, I remember one day when my mother scold me for using the Internet in a large extent whereas on before 2 days there will be my exam and the result was very poor and teacher scold me as well as my parents.

✓ Yes, I remember one day when my mother scolded me for using the Internet excessively because my exam was two days away, and my result was very poor. The teacher scolded me as well as my parents.

The verbs 'scold' should be in past tense 'scolded' to match the past context. 'In a large extent' is incorrect; 'excessively' is a better adverb. 'On before 2 days there will be my exam' is incorrect; it should be 'my exam was two days away'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct past tense usage.

× Yes, I remember one day when my mother scold me for using the Internet in a large extent whereas on before 2 days there will be my exam and the result was very poor and teacher scold me as well as my parents.

✓ Yes, I remember one day when my mother scolded me for using the Internet excessively because my exam was two days away, and my result was very poor. The teacher scolded me as well as my parents.

The phrase 'in a large extent' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to a large extent' or better replaced with 'excessively'. Also, 'on before 2 days' is incorrect; it should be 'two days before'. These preposition errors are corrected for proper meaning.

× According to my perspective, I don't spend too much time online because spending too much time on various websites like Instagram, WhatsApp consumes lot of time.

✓ In my opinion, I don't spend too much time online because spending too much time on various websites like Instagram and WhatsApp consumes a lot of time.

'According to my perspective' is awkward; 'In my opinion' is more natural. 'Consumes lot of time' is missing the article 'a' before 'lot'. Also, 'Instagram, WhatsApp' should be connected with 'and' for proper listing.

× Instead of using Internet very much, I preferably read books and novels to encourage my knowledge.

✓ Instead of using the Internet very much, I prefer to read books and novels to enhance my knowledge.

'Using Internet' needs the definite article 'the' as 'the Internet'. 'Preferably' is an adverb meaning 'ideally' but here 'prefer to' is correct to express preference. 'Encourage my knowledge' is incorrect; 'enhance my knowledge' is the correct collocation.

× Without Internet a life is alone nowadays enhancement of technology whereas every individual is dependent on Internet.

✓ Without the Internet, life is lonely nowadays due to the advancement of technology, whereas every individual is dependent on the Internet.

'Without Internet a life is alone' is incorrect; it should be 'Without the Internet, life is lonely'. 'Enhancement of technology' is better expressed as 'advancement of technology'. Also, 'dependent on Internet' needs 'the' before 'Internet'. These corrections fix article usage and sentence structure.

× Without Internet a life is alone nowadays enhancement of technology whereas every individual is dependent on Internet.

✓ Without the Internet, life is lonely nowadays due to the advancement of technology, whereas every individual is dependent on the Internet.

The phrase 'dependent on Internet' requires the definite article 'the' before 'Internet'. Also, 'enhancement of technology' is better expressed as 'advancement of technology' to convey progress. Prepositions and articles are corrected for proper meaning.

× But without Internet I preferably used to study the novels and read books of ancient times.

✓ But without the Internet, I would prefer to study novels and read books from ancient times.

'Preferably used to' is incorrect; 'would prefer to' correctly expresses a hypothetical preference. 'Novels' does not need 'the' unless specific novels are meant. 'Books of ancient times' is better phrased as 'books from ancient times'. Modal verb usage is corrected for hypothetical situation.