Internet— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to give a clear and direct answer to the question first, then add specific details. Avoid unclear phrases like "when I was great too" and focus on correct grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I started using the internet when I was about 10 years old. The first app I used was YouTube, mainly to watch videos and sometimes to study. It helped me learn new things in an easy way.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and avoid filler phrases like "you know". Use proper sentence structure and linking words to make your answer clear and coherent. Be specific about frequency and purpose.

Ejemplo: I usually go online every day, especially on social media platforms like Facebook, TikTok, and Instagram. I use them to chat with my family and friends and to stay updated with what's happening.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear and logical answer with correct grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Be specific about the situation and the reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember that I was not allowed to use the internet when I was going to the toilet. My doctor advised me not to use my phone there to protect my health, so I followed that rule.

Sugerencia: Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your thoughts. Be specific about how much time you spend online and why you think it is too much.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I am addicted to social media. I use it almost every moment to chat with my friends and watch videos on TikTok.

Sugerencia: Give a clear and complete answer. Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition. Use linking words to explain your feelings and thoughts logically. Be specific about what you would do or feel without the internet.

Ejemplo: Without the internet, I think I would feel lost because I rely on it for many things. I have never tried living without it, but I believe I would feel frustrated and disconnected from my friends.

× I started using the Internet when I was great too.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was great too.

The sentence contains a semantic error rather than a grammatical one; 'great too' is unclear and likely a misuse of words, but it does not violate past tense rules. No past tense correction is needed here.

× The first app that I started use that that is YouTube and mainly to watch some videos on YouTube and sometimes I use YouTube to study.

✓ The first app that I started using is YouTube, mainly to watch some videos on YouTube, and sometimes I use YouTube to study.

After 'started', the verb should be in the '-ing' form ('using') to be grammatically correct. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I usually go online on social media like Facebook, TikTok or Instagram because of, you know, I'm the young people.

✓ I usually go online on social media like Facebook, TikTok, or Instagram because, you know, I'm young.

The phrase 'because of, you know, I'm the young people' is incorrect. 'Because' is the correct conjunction here, and 'I'm the young people' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I'm young'. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× So I usually go online and social media to chat with my friends family or my friends in social media.

✓ So I usually go online and use social media to chat with my family and friends on social media.

The phrase 'go online and social media' is incorrect; it should be 'go online and use social media'. Also, 'friends family' is ambiguous and should be 'family and friends'. The preposition 'on' is used with 'social media'.

× When I was going to the toilet is the only time that I I wasn't allowed myself to use the Internet because I follow the rules for my health.

✓ When I was going to the toilet was the only time that I wasn't allowed to use the Internet because I followed the rules for my health.

The phrase 'When I was going to the toilet is the only time' mixes tenses; 'was' is correct to match past tense. 'I wasn't allowed myself' is incorrect; it should be 'I wasn't allowed to use'. 'I follow' should be past tense 'I followed' to maintain consistency.

× So I'm listening to the doctor and they said I shouldn't use phone to when I go to the toilet.

✓ So I listened to the doctor, and they said I shouldn't use my phone when I go to the toilet.

'I'm listening' should be past tense 'I listened' to match 'they said'. 'Use phone to' is incorrect; it should be 'use my phone'. The word 'to' before 'when' is unnecessary and removed.

× Yes, I'm spending too much time online because I think that I'm addicted to the Internet, social media.

✓ Yes, I spend too much time online because I think that I'm addicted to the Internet and social media.

'I'm spending' suggests a temporary action; 'I spend' is better for habitual actions. Also, 'Internet, social media' should be connected with 'and' for clarity.

× I used it for over for like every time, every second and every moment to chatting with my friend.

✓ I use it almost all the time, every second and every moment, chatting with my friends.

'Used' is past tense but the context suggests present habitual action, so 'use' is correct. 'To chatting' is incorrect; 'chatting' alone is correct after a comma. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends'.

× I'll serve webs or serve videos on Tiktok.

✓ I watch videos or browse websites on TikTok.

'Serve webs' and 'serve videos' are incorrect phrases. The correct verbs are 'watch' for videos and 'browse' for websites. Also, 'TikTok' is capitalized properly.

× I cannot do anything without the Internet because I feel like I'm gonna lose something if I do something without the Internet and I don't like that.

✓ I cannot do anything without the Internet because I feel like I will lose something if I do something without the Internet, and I don't like that.

'Gonna' is informal; 'will' is the correct modal verb for future tense in formal speech. The sentence is also improved with commas for clarity.

× I don't like that feeling. So I never tried that before. But I think if I do something without the Internet, I'm gonna be a little angry or.

✓ I don't like that feeling, so I have never tried that before. But I think if I do something without the Internet, I will be a little angry.

'So I never tried that before' should be present perfect 'I have never tried that before' to indicate experience up to now. 'Gonna' is informal; 'will' is preferred. The sentence ending with 'or' is incomplete and corrected.