Internet— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
When did you start using the internet?
Candidato
I started to use the Internet about 10 years ago. When I was 15 years old, my father bought me my first mobile phone so I can access to the Internet.
Examinador
How often do you go online?
Candidato
I go online about 30 times a day recently. I use the e-mail a lot because I have to contact the committee of an international conference.
Examinador
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
Candidato
Yes, definitely. When I was in middle school and high school, my parents and teachers didn't allow me to use the Internet because they believed that it would be detrimental to my studies.
Examinador
Do you think you spend too much time online?
Candidato
Yes, recently I spend too much time online. However, I spend the most of time on my study so I think it's OK.
Examinador
What would you do without the internet?
Candidato
Without the Internet, I would probably spend more time on reading interesting and engaging novels like Knit Women. As a postgraduate student, study English. I believe this is a great way to expand my vocabulary.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
When did you start using the internet?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误，如“so I can access to the Internet”应为“so I could access the Internet”。建议注意时态一致性和介词使用，避免语法错误。
Ejemplo: I started using the Internet about 10 years ago when my father bought me my first mobile phone, which allowed me to access the Internet.
How often do you go online?
Puntuación: 80.0Sugerencia: 回答较为简洁，但“about 30 times a day recently”表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的时间频率表达，并丰富细节。
Ejemplo: Recently, I go online around 30 times a day, mainly to check and respond to emails for an international conference committee I am involved with.
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
Puntuación: 85.0Sugerencia: 回答内容完整且逻辑清晰，但可以使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时增加具体细节使内容更丰富。
Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. When I was in middle and high school, my parents and teachers didn't allow me to use the Internet because they believed it would negatively affect my studies.
Do you think you spend too much time online?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误，如“spend the most of time”应为“spend most of my time”。建议注意冠词和词组搭配，同时表达更自然。
Ejemplo: Yes, recently I have been spending too much time online. However, since most of my time is dedicated to studying, I think it's acceptable.
What would you do without the internet?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答中句子结构不完整，如“As a postgraduate student, study English”缺少主语和谓语。建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性。
Ejemplo: Without the Internet, I would probably spend more time reading interesting and engaging novels like "Knit Women". As a postgraduate student, I would also focus more on studying English, which I believe is a great way to expand my vocabulary.
Gramática
× so I can access to the Internet.
✓ so I could access the Internet.
这里是过去的情境，应该用情态动词的过去式could，而不是can。同时，动词access后不需要介词to。
× I use the e-mail a lot because I have to contact the committee of an international conference.
✓ I use e-mail a lot because I have to contact the committee of an international conference.
在这里，e-mail作为不可数名词使用时，不需要加定冠词the。
× I go online about 30 times a day recently.
✓ I have been going online about 30 times a day recently.
recently表示最近一段时间，应该用现在完成进行时表示动作持续发生，而不是一般现在时。
× Yes, recently I spend too much time online.
✓ Yes, recently I have been spending too much time online.
recently表示最近一段时间，应该用现在完成进行时表示动作持续发生，而不是一般现在时。
× However, I spend the most of time on my study so I think it's OK.
✓ However, I spend most of my time on my study so I think it's OK.
短语中不需要加定冠词the，应该是most of my time。
× As a postgraduate student, study English.
✓ As a postgraduate student, I study English.
句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整，应该加上主语I。
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