Internet— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: この回答は文法の誤りと不自然な表現が含まれています。例えば、「I use Internet for the first time」は過去形の「used」を使うべきです。また、「the device that is related to the SIM」や「Today we used to connect it as pen drive」は意味が不明瞭で、より具体的で自然な表現に改善が必要です。文を短くし、過去の経験を明確に述べることを意識しましょう。

Ejemplo: I started using the internet when I was about 10 years old. At that time, we connected through a modem, which used a SIM card. Nowadays, I usually connect using a USB dongle.

Sugerencia: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、「My daughter often use my phone do switch almost all connected uh every time every hour or day」は意味が伝わりにくいです。簡潔で明確な文を作り、接続詞を使って論理的に説明しましょう。

Ejemplo: I go online several times a day to check messages and social media. Also, my daughter often uses my phone to stay connected, so I usually keep it on silent mode.

Sugerencia: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が分かりにくい部分があります。例えば、「restification」は誤用で、「restriction」が正しいです。また、時制や前置詞の使い方を改善し、より具体的に説明しましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, when I was in grade 11, I lived in a hostel where internet use was restricted. We were only allowed to use it during shopping time on Saturdays for two or three hours.

Sugerencia: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「I have developed a bad habit to online to be online every time a day」は不自然です。簡潔で正しい文法を使い、理由や具体例を明確に述べましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think I spend too much time online. Even at work, I often take short breaks to check messages and social media posts.

Sugerencia: 「go for the outburst」は不自然な表現です。また、「nearer friends whom are available there」も意味が不明瞭です。より自然な表現を使い、具体的な活動を明確に述べましょう。

Ejemplo: I think I would feel frustrated without the internet. I would spend more time playing basketball with my close friends and reading interesting novels like "Style" and "Summer."

× When I was about 10 years old, I use Internet for the first time.

✓ When I was about 10 years old, I used the Internet for the first time.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb should be in the past tense 'used' instead of the present tense 'use'. Also, 'Internet' should be preceded by the definite article 'the'.

× At that time we use Internet through the modem, the device that is related to the SIM.

✓ At that time, we used the Internet through the modem, the device that is related to the SIM.

The action happened in the past, so 'use' should be changed to the past tense 'used'. Also, 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Today we used to connect it as pen drive.

✓ Today, we connect it using a pen drive.

'Used to' indicates past habitual action, but the sentence refers to present practice, so 'used to' is incorrect. Also, 'as pen drive' is incorrect; it should be 'using a pen drive'.

× My daughter often use my phone do switch almost all connected uh every time every hour or day, but I keep it on silent so.

✓ My daughter often uses my phone to switch almost all connections every time, every hour or day, but I keep it on silent.

'Daughter' is singular, so the verb should be 'uses' not 'use'. Also, 'do switch' is incorrect; it should be 'to switch'. The phrase 'almost all connected' is unclear and corrected to 'almost all connections'.

× Yes, when I was in grade 11 or two, Bill, I used to live in hostel, so we were only allowed for the shopping time.

✓ Yes, when I was in grade 11 or 12, Bill, I used to live in a hostel, so we were only allowed during shopping time.

The phrase 'grade 11 or two' is likely 'grade 11 or 12'. 'Hostel' needs the article 'a'. 'Allowed for the shopping time' is incorrect; it should be 'allowed during shopping time'.

× Uh, well, I remember it's on only for Saturday for two or three hours.

✓ Uh, well, I remember it was only on Saturdays for two or three hours.

'It's' is present tense, but the event is in the past, so it should be 'it was'. Also, 'only for Saturday' should be plural 'Saturdays' to indicate recurring event.

× That was the restification over there and we are so limited to the Internet.

✓ That was the restriction over there and we were so limited in using the Internet.

'Restification' is incorrect; the correct word is 'restriction'. 'We are' should be past tense 'we were' to match the past context. 'Limited to the Internet' is better expressed as 'limited in using the Internet'.

× Yes, I have developed a bad habit to online to be online every time a day or even I am on work.

✓ Yes, I have developed a bad habit of being online all the time every day, even when I am at work.

The phrase 'habit to online' is incorrect; it should be 'habit of being online'. 'Every time a day' is awkward and corrected to 'all the time every day'. 'On work' should be 'at work'.

× I used to have some short breaks and go through the phone and take some messages and also some media post there's.

✓ I used to have some short breaks and go through my phone to check messages and also some media posts there.

'Go through the phone' is better as 'go through my phone'. 'Take some messages' is incorrect; it should be 'check messages'. 'Media post there's' is corrected to 'media posts there'.

× I believe I'll go for the outburst when I'm without the Internet.

✓ I believe I'll have an outburst when I'm without the Internet.

'Go for the outburst' is incorrect phrasing; the correct expression is 'have an outburst'.

× I used to play basketball with my nearer friends whom are available there.

✓ I used to play basketball with my close friends who were available there.

'Nearer friends' is incorrect; 'close friends' is the correct expression. 'Whom are' is incorrect; 'who were' is correct for subject and past tense.

× Sometimes I would read some novel such as Style and Summer.

✓ Sometimes I would read some novels such as Style and Summer.

'Novel' should be plural 'novels' when referring to multiple books. Also, 'such as' is correctly used here.

× Love this, they are so interesting.

✓ I love these; they are so interesting.

The sentence lacks a subject; 'Love this' should be 'I love these' to be grammatically correct and clear.