Internet— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use the correct tense and make your answer more natural by adding linking words and details. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain with reasons or context.

Ejemplo: I started using the internet in 2016 when Jio was launched. At that time, my father bought me a new Android phone, which made it easier for me to access the internet regularly.

Sugerencia: Use correct prepositions and improve sentence structure. Also, add linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your activities online.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I spend about four to five hours online every day. Mostly, I scroll through reels and also read books on the internet, which helps me relax and learn new things.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide more context to make it natural and effective.

Ejemplo: Last month, when my friend and I were hanging out, we decided to make a rule to avoid using our phones for one hour. So, that day, I did not use the internet for an entire hour.

Sugerencia: Focus on correct grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your plans for the future.

Ejemplo: Yes, nowadays I believe I spend too much time on the internet. Usually, I spend four to five hours scrolling reels or playing games with friends. In the future, I plan to reduce my screen time to stay healthier.

Sugerencia: Use correct verb forms and linking words to make your answer more natural and coherent. Provide specific examples to enrich your response.

Ejemplo: Without the internet, I usually spend time with my friends to have fun. Sometimes, I also read books to keep myself entertained and informed.

× I start using Internet since 2016 when Jio was launched.

✓ I started using the Internet since 2016 when Jio was launched.

The sentence refers to a past event starting in 2016, so the verb 'start' should be in the past tense 'started' to match the time frame. Also, 'Internet' should have the definite article 'the' before it.

× I start using Internet since 2016 when Jio was launched.

✓ I started using the Internet since 2016 when Jio was launched.

The noun 'Internet' is a unique entity and requires the definite article 'the' before it in English.

× My father bought me a new phone which is Android.

✓ My father bought me a new phone which is an Android.

'Android' is a noun here referring to the operating system, so it needs the indefinite article 'an' before it to be grammatically correct.

× To be honest, I use Internet four to five hours in a day.

✓ To be honest, I use the Internet four to five hours a day.

'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'in a day' is better expressed as 'a day' in this context.

× I'm on mostly scroll reels and read books on Internet.

✓ I mostly scroll reels and read books on the Internet.

The phrase 'I'm on mostly scroll reels' is incorrect. It should be 'I mostly scroll reels'. Also, 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Last month my friend and I was hanging.

✓ Last month my friend and I were hanging out.

The subject 'my friend and I' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' not 'was'. Also, 'hanging' is incomplete; 'hanging out' is the correct phrase.

× We made a rule for one hour not using the phone.

✓ We made a rule to not use the phone for one hour.

The phrase 'for one hour not using the phone' is awkward. Using 'to not use the phone for one hour' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I do not use the Internet for one hour.

✓ I did not use the Internet for one hour.

Since the event happened in the past ('That was the day'), the verb should be in past tense 'did not use'.

× Yes, nowadays I believe that I am spending too much time on Internet.

✓ Yes, nowadays I believe that I am spending too much time on the Internet.

'Internet' requires the definite article 'the' when used with prepositions like 'on'.

× I usually spend 4 to 5 hour on Internet bus scrolling real or playing game with friends.

✓ I usually spend 4 to 5 hours on the Internet, but scrolling reels or playing games with friends.

'Hour' should be plural 'hours' when referring to multiple hours. Also, 'bus' is a typo for 'but', 'real' should be 'reels', and 'game' should be plural 'games'.

× And future I'll leave, I'll decrease my screen time.

✓ In the future, I'll reduce my screen time.

The phrase 'And future I'll leave' is incorrect and unclear. 'In the future' is the correct phrase, and 'reduce' is a better verb choice than 'decrease' in this context.

× Usually I go to my friends to having fun, but sometime I read books while I'm not using the Internet.

✓ Usually I go to my friends' place to have fun, but sometimes I read books when I'm not using the Internet.

'Go to my friends to having fun' is incorrect; it should be 'go to my friends' place to have fun'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Also, 'while' is better replaced with 'when' here.