Internet— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific details. For example, instead of repeating 'computers' and 'Internet' multiple times, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I started using the Internet during my school days when computers were first introduced there. It was a new technology back then, and we accessed the Internet through the school computers.

Sugerencia: Your answer is quite detailed but can be more structured and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary to express frequency and habits.

Ejemplo: I go online almost all the time except when I am sleeping. Nowadays, many activities like watching TV or using social media apps such as WhatsApp, Facebook, and Instagram require an Internet connection.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and complete your sentences clearly. Use linking words to explain reasons logically. Also, improve grammar by using correct tenses and sentence structures.

Ejemplo: Yes, during examinations, I restrict myself from using the Internet because it is a big distraction. Since we use phones with Internet access all the time, avoiding it helps me concentrate better.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use proper grammar and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary.

Ejemplo: Yes, I spend a lot of time online because most activities, including practicing IELTS speaking, are done on computers or mobile phones. For example, I use an IELTS speaking practice app for several hours daily to improve my skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by making it more concise and structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating phrases like 'Internet is now part of life'.

Ejemplo: I cannot imagine life without the Internet since it is an essential part of daily life. However, if there were no Internet, I would spend more time reading books, exercising, and exploring the outdoors.

× I have started using the Internet at my school time.

✓ I started using the Internet during my school time.

The present perfect tense 'have started' is incorrect here because the action happened at a specific time in the past ('school time'). The simple past tense 'started' should be used to indicate a completed action in the past.

× At that time this technology was very new and we were having the computers in our schools and in the period of computers we were using the Internet in our school computers.

✓ At that time, this technology was very new and we had computers in our schools, and during the era of computers, we used the Internet on our school computers.

The phrase 'were having the computers' is incorrect; 'had' is the correct verb to indicate possession. Also, 'in the period of computers' is awkward; 'during the era of computers' is more appropriate. Prepositions 'in' and 'on' are corrected to fit the context.

× In today's world, we are online.

✓ In today's world, we are always online.

The sentence is grammatically correct but can be improved by adding 'always' to better express the continuous nature of being online in today's world.

× The TV is also running on Internet and WhatsApp, Facebook, Instagram, everything is on Internet.

✓ The TV is also running on the Internet, and WhatsApp, Facebook, Instagram, everything is on the Internet.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'Internet' as it is a specific entity. Also, a comma is added for clarity.

× Yes, at the time of examinations, I restrict myself to avoid Internet because Internet is a big, big distraction uh, we are using phone 24/7 and in phone we are using Internet, which is definitely uh, decrease our focus and.

✓ Yes, during examinations, I restrict myself from using the Internet because the Internet is a big distraction. We use phones 24/7, and on phones, we use the Internet, which definitely decreases our focus.

The phrase 'restrict myself to avoid Internet' is incorrect; 'restrict myself from using the Internet' is correct. Also, 'decrease' should be 'decreases' to agree with singular subject 'which'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Uh, yeah. I think I spent so much time online because I everything is on computers, laptops or on mobile phones, like I'm using this app IELTS speaking practice.

✓ Uh, yeah. I think I spend so much time online because everything is on computers, laptops, or mobile phones, like I'm using this app IELTS speaking practice.

The past tense 'spent' is incorrect here because the speaker is talking about a habitual action in the present. The present tense 'spend' should be used.

× This is also online and from last I think so many hours I'm just using this app.

✓ This is also online, and for the last many hours, I think I've just been using this app.

The phrase 'from last I think so many hours' is incorrect. It should be 'for the last many hours'. Also, the present perfect continuous tense 'I've just been using' is appropriate to indicate an action continuing up to now.

× I will definitely sleep only and I would like to read some books or go outside, do some exercise, exploring the world.

✓ I will definitely just sleep, and I would like to read some books or go outside, do some exercise, and explore the world.

The phrase 'sleep only' is awkward; 'just sleep' is better. Also, 'exploring the world' should be parallel with other verbs and changed to 'explore the world'. The conjunction 'and' is added for correct sentence structure.