Internet— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Try to avoid redundancy and improve grammar by using correct verb tenses and sentence structure. For example, say "I started using the internet when I was about 6 or 7 years old because my parents wanted to make my daily life better."

Ejemplo: I started using the internet when I was about 6 or 7 years old because my parents wanted to make my daily life better.

Sugerencia: Your answer covers the question but could be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, "I am online almost all the time because I work online. Besides handling many tasks, I also use social media for my business and chat with friends when needed."

Ejemplo: I am online almost all the time because I work online. Besides handling many tasks, I also use social media for my business and chat with friends when needed.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, "Yes, I remember when I was in Poland. We didn't have internet access sometimes, especially during meetings when we were not allowed to use it. It was quite interesting for us."

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember when I was in Poland. We didn't have internet access sometimes, especially during meetings when we were not allowed to use it. It was quite interesting for us.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and fluent. Use linking words and correct prepositions. For example, "Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I can't control my screen time. Sometimes I try to turn off my phone and go outside, but not always."

Ejemplo: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I can't control my screen time. Sometimes I try to turn off my phone and go outside, but not always.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words and correct verb forms. For example, "Without the internet, I would go to parks, markets, or lakes for walks. I could also meet my friends and enjoy playing games together."

Ejemplo: Without the internet, I would go to parks, markets, or lakes for walks. I could also meet my friends and enjoy playing games together.

× I did start using the Internet when I was a child, like 6-7 years old because my father and my mother always trying to make my daily life better and they try to do that for me.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was a child, like 6-7 years old, because my father and my mother were always trying to make my daily life better and they tried to do that for me.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'did start' which is unnecessary; simple past 'started' is correct. Also, 'always trying' should be in past continuous 'were always trying' to match the past time frame. 'They try' should be past tense 'they tried' to maintain consistency. Use past tense verbs when referring to past events.

× my father and my mother always trying to make my daily life better

✓ my father and my mother were always trying to make my daily life better

The verb phrase 'always trying' needs an auxiliary verb to form the past continuous tense. 'Were always trying' correctly expresses an ongoing action in the past.

× I have many many tasks to do online.

✓ I have many tasks to do online.

The repetition 'many many' is informal and redundant. Use 'many' once to express quantity correctly.

× I am using my social media as a business and I also chatting with my friends online sometimes when I need it.

✓ I use my social media as a business and I also chat with my friends online sometimes when I need to.

The present continuous 'am using' and 'also chatting' are incorrect here because these are habitual actions. Use simple present 'use' and 'chat' for habits. Also, 'when I need it' should be 'when I need to' to complete the verb phrase.

× we had not Internet and sometimes we had some meetings and we were not allowed to use the Internet

✓ we did not have Internet and sometimes we had some meetings where we were not allowed to use the Internet

'Had not Internet' is incorrect; use 'did not have Internet' to form the negative past tense. Also, adding 'where' clarifies the sentence structure.

× Sometimes I'm trying to turn off my phone and go to outside, but not always.

✓ Sometimes I try to turn off my phone and go outside, but not always.

The phrase 'go to outside' is incorrect; 'go outside' is the correct form without 'to'. Also, 'I'm trying' should be 'I try' for habitual action.

× I would do go to some park, go to the markets, go to the lake to walk.

✓ I would go to some park, go to the markets, and go to the lake to walk.

The phrase 'would do go' is incorrect; 'would go' is correct. Also, adding 'and' before the last item improves sentence structure and clarity.