Internet— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时时态不一致，应该保持过去时态一致；内容可以更具体，避免简单重复。

Ejemplo: I started using the Internet when I was in middle school. Initially, I used it mainly for researching school projects, which helped me find detailed information and improve my assignments.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复表达，如“watch movies, watch TV”，应避免冗余；可以用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: I go online almost every day to check emails, read news, and watch educational videos as well as movies, which makes my life more convenient.

Sugerencia: 回答较好，但可以用更多连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember a time during my childhood when my parents restricted my Internet use because they believed excessive screen time would distract me from studying.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误（如“make making friends”），应注意语法准确；内容表达可更清晰。

Ejemplo: Sometimes, I think I spend too much time online, often browsing useless websites. Therefore, I am trying to limit my online time to focus more on reading books, exercising, and socializing with friends.

Sugerencia: 回答自然且内容丰富，但可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: Without the Internet, I would read more books and spend more quality time with my family and friends. Additionally, I might go for walks or play outdoor games, which would make life different but enjoyable.

× At first I use it for school work.

✓ At first I used it for school work.

这里描述的是过去的动作，应该使用过去时态。原句使用了现在时态，时态不一致。

× My parents were quite strict about screen time and believe that too much Internet could distract me from my studies.

✓ My parents were quite strict about screen time and believed that too much Internet could distract me from my studies.

前半句使用了过去时态，后半句的动词believe应与之保持一致，使用过去时believed。

× I'm trying to limit my online time to do more useful things like reading books or doing sports or make making friends.

✓ I'm trying to limit my online time to do more useful things like reading books, doing sports, or making friends.

列举多个动名词时，应该保持形式一致，且使用逗号分隔。原句中'make making'重复且形式不一致，应改为'making'。