Internet— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和介词。

Ejemplo: I started using the Internet in 2020 because of the COVID-19 pandemic. During that time, our school held online classes, so I had to use the Internet to attend lessons.

Sugerencia: 回答较为清晰，但表达有些重复且不够流畅。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意词汇搭配。

Ejemplo: I usually go online once a week because I am in senior grades and have a lot of homework. Therefore, I need to focus on my studies and prepare for graduation.

Sugerencia: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复。

Ejemplo: Yes, my parents banned me from using the Internet when I was in senior school. They wanted me to focus on preparing for graduation and stay calm.

Sugerencia: 表达不自然且有语法错误，句子不连贯。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免重复，并注意词汇的正确使用。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I find it hard to control myself. Sometimes, I use the Internet even when I should be sleeping, so my parents often take away my phone.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的动词形式，简化句子结构，并避免重复。

Ejemplo: If I didn't have the Internet, I would go outside to take photos. I could capture beautiful views of our city and take pictures with my classmates and friends, which would make me happy.

× I started using the Internet in 2020 years because during 2020 years our country have the have the COVID-19 and we must having the online classes on Internet so we can't go to the school.

✓ I started using the Internet in 2020 because during 2020 our country had COVID-19 and we had to have online classes on the Internet so we couldn't go to school.

“2020 years” 应改为“2020”，年份不需要复数形式。动词“have”应使用过去式“had”，因为描述的是过去的情况。短语“must having”错误，应改为“had to have”，表示过去必须做某事。动词“can't”应改为过去式“couldn't”，与过去时间一致。

× I started using the Internet in 2020 years because during 2020 years our country have the have the COVID-19 and we must having the online classes on Internet so we can't go to the school.

✓ I started using the Internet in 2020 because during 2020 our country had COVID-19 and we had to have online classes on the Internet so we couldn't go to school.

“classes”是复数形式，前面用“the online classes”是正确的，保持不变。

× we must having the online classes on Internet

✓ we had to have online classes on the Internet

“must having”结构错误，must后应接动词原形，且描述过去情况应使用“had to have”。

× we must having the online classes on Internet

✓ we had to have online classes on the Internet

“on Internet”应改为“on the Internet”，Internet前需要加定冠词“the”。

× our country have the have the COVID-19

✓ our country had COVID-19

“have”应使用过去式“had”，因为描述的是过去的情况。

× so we can't go to the school

✓ so we couldn't go to school

“can't”应改为过去式“couldn't”，与过去时间一致；“go to the school”中“the”不必要，通常说“go to school”。

× I surf the Internet once a week because I'm now in senior grades and I'm too busy with my homework and therefore I can't have a lot of time to surf on the Internet.

✓ I surf the Internet once a week because I'm now in senior grades and I'm too busy with my homework, so I don't have a lot of time to surf the Internet.

“can't have a lot of time”表达不自然，改为“don't have a lot of time”更符合习惯用法；“surf on the Internet”中“on”多余，通常说“surf the Internet”。

× I can't have a lot of time to surf on the Internet.

✓ I don't have a lot of time to surf the Internet.

“surf on the Internet”中“on”不需要，正确表达是“surf the Internet”。

× I must spend time on graduation.

✓ I must spend time preparing for graduation.

“spend time on graduation”表达不准确，应改为“spend time preparing for graduation”，表示花时间准备毕业。

× I have prevented from Internet by my parents doing my uh senior school because when I was senior school I was I was too busy with the graduation so my parents, my parents banned me from the Internet to makes me more calm down and prepare for graduation.

✓ I was prevented from using the Internet by my parents during my senior school because when I was in senior school I was too busy with graduation, so my parents banned me from the Internet to help me calm down and prepare for graduation.

“I have prevented”应改为被动语态“I was prevented”；“doing my uh senior school”表达不清，应改为“during my senior school”；“makes me more calm down”语法错误，应改为“help me calm down”。

× I have prevented from Internet by my parents doing my uh senior school because when I was senior school I was I was too busy with the graduation so my parents, my parents banned me from the Internet to makes me more calm down and prepare for graduation.

✓ I was prevented from using the Internet by my parents during my senior school because when I was in senior school I was too busy with graduation, so my parents banned me from the Internet to help me calm down and prepare for graduation.

描述过去事件，动词应使用过去时态，如“was prevented”，“banned”。

× I have prevented from Internet by my parents

✓ I was prevented from using the Internet by my parents

“prevented from Internet”缺少动词形式，应为“prevented from using the Internet”。

× to makes me more calm down

✓ to help me calm down

“makes”应改为“help”，且“calm down”是动词短语，不需要“more”。

× I think the answer is yes because I can't control myself on the Internet so I always surf on the Internet doing my sleeping or I always use this too much time so my parents always banned me from my mobile phone.

✓ I think the answer is yes because I can't control myself on the Internet, so I always surf the Internet when I should be sleeping or I always spend too much time on it, so my parents always ban me from using my mobile phone.

“doing my sleeping”表达错误，应改为“when I should be sleeping”；“use this too much time”应改为“spend too much time”；“banned”应改为现在时“ban”，因为“always”表示习惯性动作。

× I always surf on the Internet

✓ I always surf the Internet

“surf on the Internet”中“on”多余，正确表达是“surf the Internet”。

× my parents always banned me from my mobile phone.

✓ my parents always ban me from using my mobile phone.

“always”表示习惯性动作，动词应使用一般现在时“ban”，而非过去时“banned”。

× I will go outside and taking some photo and when I taking the photo I can capture the the nice views about the our city and I and I always I will I can make I can taking photos with my classmates and my friends.

✓ I will go outside and take some photos, and when I take photos I can capture the nice views of our city. I can also take photos with my classmates and my friends.

“taking”应改为动词原形“take”与“will”连用；“when I taking”应改为“when I take”；“make I can taking”语法混乱，应简化为“I can take”。

× capture the the nice views about the our city

✓ capture the nice views of our city

重复使用“the the”错误，应去掉一个；“about the our city”应改为“of our city”，表示所属关系。

× capture the nice views about the our city

✓ capture the nice views of our city

“views about the city”表达不自然，应改为“views of our city”，表示城市的景色。

× and I and I always I will I can make I can taking photos with my classmates and my friends.

✓ and I can always take photos with my classmates and my friends.

句子重复且结构混乱，应简化为“and I can always take photos with my classmates and my friends”。

× It also makes me more happy.

✓ It also makes me happier.

“more happy”应改为比较级“happier”，形容词happy的比较级形式。