Internet— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Avoid short, incomplete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, be specific about your age or time period when you started using the internet.

Ejemplo: I started using the internet when I was about eight years old. At home, we had a laptop and some tablets, which I used frequently. Over time, I learned not only how to use the internet but also understood its benefits and drawbacks.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Be more specific about how often you go online and what you do.

Ejemplo: I go online almost every day because I enjoy online shopping, watching movies, and reading blogs. The internet is very informative and offers many benefits if used wisely.

Sugerencia: Work on grammar and sentence clarity. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective. Specify the reason and duration if possible.

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember a time during my matriculation exams when I was not allowed to use the internet. My brother asked me to avoid using mobile phones, laptops, or tablets to help me focus on my studies.

Sugerencia: Improve clarity and grammar. Avoid unclear phrases and use linking words to organize your ideas. Be specific about what activities take your time online.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I use the internet for many things like searching for information and using social media on my phone. This often reduces the time I spend on physical activities.

Sugerencia: Make your sentences more fluent and connected. Use linking words and correct grammar. Be specific about the types of books or authors you enjoy.

Ejemplo: If I didn't have the internet, I would usually read books. I enjoy works by different authors, especially Shakespeare and Helen Keller, because I find their writing very inspiring.

× There was a laptop in my home, some tablets and mobile's.

✓ There was a laptop in my home, some tablets and mobiles.

The word 'mobile's' is incorrect because the apostrophe is wrongly used to form a plural. The correct plural form is 'mobiles' without an apostrophe.

× Which I use.

✓ Which I used.

The sentence fragment 'Which I use.' is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb agreement in past tense. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased to 'which I used' to maintain past tense consistency.

× So I started using it in my childhood and I learn how to use it, how its benefits and its disadvantages as well.

✓ So I started using it in my childhood and I learned how to use it, its benefits and its disadvantages as well.

The verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match the past action 'started using'. Also, 'how its benefits and its disadvantages' is incorrect; it should be 'its benefits and its disadvantages' without 'how'.

× I love enjoying watching movies online.

✓ I love watching movies online.

The phrase 'love enjoying watching' is redundant and awkward. 'Love watching' is sufficient and grammatically correct.

× So. It is very informative to use Internet as it has so many benefits that we can easily and we can use it wisely as well.

✓ So, it is very informative to use the Internet as it has many benefits that we can easily use wisely as well.

The sentence has punctuation and structure issues. 'So.' should be 'So,' and 'use Internet' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'that we can easily and we can use it wisely' is awkward; it should be 'that we can easily use wisely'.

× So that's are the benefits of goal now.

✓ So those are the benefits of going online now.

'That's are' is incorrect; 'those are' is correct for plural. 'Goal now' is unclear and likely meant to be 'going online now'.

× Yes, there was a time when I weren't allowed to use Internet when I had my exams of matriculation level.

✓ Yes, there was a time when I wasn't allowed to use the Internet when I had my matriculation exams.

The contraction 'weren't' is incorrect for singular subject 'I'; it should be 'wasn't'. Also, 'use Internet' needs the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'exams of matriculation level' is better as 'matriculation exams'.

× My brother. Ask me to not use any mobile any. Laptop, any tablet, he just refused me to use all these things.

✓ My brother asked me not to use any mobile, laptop, or tablet; he just refused to let me use all these things.

The sentence fragments and incorrect verb forms need correction. 'Ask' should be 'asked'. 'To not use' is better as 'not to use'. 'Refused me to use' is incorrect; it should be 'refused to let me use'.

× So this is the time I wasn't allowed to use the Internet.

✓ So this was the time I wasn't allowed to use the Internet.

The phrase 'this is the time' should be in past tense 'this was the time' to match the past context.

× Yes, I think I spend too much time online bycause.

✓ Yes, I think I spend too much time online because.

The word 'bycause' is a misspelling of 'because'.

× In this. Did you tell tecnological word?

✓ In this technological world,

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be 'In this technological world,' to start the sentence properly.

× You can use judge pity.

✓ You can use Jupyter.

'Judge pity' is likely a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'Jupyter', a software tool. Correcting to 'Jupyter' makes the sentence meaningful.

× You can use different social media devices on your mobile phone.

✓ You can use different social media apps on your mobile phone.

'Social media devices' is incorrect; it should be 'social media apps' or 'platforms' since devices are physical hardware.

× So I think I spent too much time on Internet rather than physical activities.

✓ So I think I spend too much time on the Internet rather than doing physical activities.

The verb tense should be present 'spend' to match 'I think'. Also, 'on Internet' needs the article 'the'. Adding 'doing' before 'physical activities' improves clarity.

× I usually read books when I don't have Internet.

✓ I usually read books when I don't have the Internet.

The phrase 'have Internet' requires the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× I love Shakespeare writing I love. Helen Keller writing 'cause these are the writing which I love into everything.

✓ I love Shakespeare's writing and Helen Keller's writing because these are the writings that I love above everything.

Possessive form is needed: 'Shakespeare's writing'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs conjunctions and proper relative pronouns. 'Because' is better than 'cause' in formal speech. 'Into everything' is incorrect; 'above everything' or 'most of all' is better.

× So that's activity which I love to do if I don't have any Internet.

✓ So that's an activity which I love to do if I don't have any Internet.

The sentence is missing the article 'an' before 'activity'.