Internet— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Apni uttor ta aro spostho o shothik bhabe gathan korun. Prothom e proshner uttor din, tarpor proyojon moto bistarito tothyo din. English e sentence gulo shothik bhabe gathan korun, jate proshner uttor ta sohoje bujha jai.

Ejemplo: I started using the internet when I was in the 8th grade. At that time, I used my father's computer to access the internet and I opened my first email account.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor ta spostho korun ebong proshner shathe mil rekhe uttor din. '425 hours' bolte ki bujhan, protyekdin koto ghonta online thaken ta bolun. Uttor ta shothik o sohoje bujhar moto korun.

Ejemplo: I usually go online for about 4 to 5 hours every day, mostly in the evenings.

Sugerencia: Apni uttor ta aro shothik o shongothito bhabe bolun. Prothome proshner uttor din, tarpor proyojon moto bistarito tothyo din. Linking words babohar kore sentence gulo ke logically jorun.

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember when I first opened my email account, my father did not allow me to use the internet every day. He scheduled one hour per day for me to use the internet because he was very strict.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor ta spostho o shothik bhabe gathan korun. Proshner uttor shuru te din, tarpor proyojon moto bistarito tothyo din. Shothik vocabulary babohar korun ebong sentence gulo ke logical bhabe jorun.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think I spend too much time online nowadays. Most of the time, I just scroll through Facebook reels or Instagram videos.

Sugerencia: Apni uttor ta aro spostho o shongothito bhabe bolun. Proshner uttor shuru te din, tarpor proyojon moto bistarito tothyo din. Sentence gulo ke shothik bhabe gathan korun ebong linking words babohar korun.

Ejemplo: I cannot imagine my life without the internet because I spend most of my day online. I use it to connect with my friends, upload pictures, and watch many videos and reels.

× I started using Internet when I was in 8th grade. Are you? Used my father's computer for. Using Internet and that time I first open my e-mail.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was in 8th grade. I used my father's computer to access the Internet, and at that time I first opened my e-mail.

The original sentence has multiple sentence fragments and lacks proper structure. 'Are you?' is irrelevant and should be removed. 'Used my father's computer for.' is incomplete and needs to be connected properly. Also, 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. The verb 'open' should be in past tense 'opened' to match the past context.

× I started using Internet when I was in 8th grade.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was in 8th grade.

The word 'Internet' is a unique noun and requires the definite article 'the' before it in English.

× I first open my e-mail.

✓ I first opened my e-mail.

The action happened in the past, so the verb should be in the past tense 'opened' instead of the present tense 'open'.

× I usually spend around 425 hours.

✓ I usually spend around 4 to 5 hours online.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks the unit of time and context. Adding 'online' clarifies the activity, and '4 to 5 hours' is a reasonable estimate instead of '425 hours' which is unrealistic for usual daily use.

× I was not allowed to use Internet every day.

✓ I was not allowed to use the Internet every day.

'Internet' requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× My father. Schedule me some hours in a day, like one hour every day to use the Internet.

✓ My father scheduled some hours for me each day, like one hour every day to use the Internet.

The original sentence has fragmented structure and incorrect pronoun placement. 'Schedule me' is incorrect; it should be 'scheduled some hours for me'. Also, 'My father.' is a fragment and should be connected properly.

× My father. Schedule me some hours in a day, like one hour every day to use the Internet.

✓ My father scheduled some hours in a day, like one hour every day to use the Internet.

The verb 'schedule' should be in past tense 'scheduled' to match the past context.

× On Internet eyes just scrolling over Facebook reels or Instagram drills.

✓ On the Internet, I am just scrolling over Facebook reels or Instagram reels.

'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'eyes' is incorrect and should be 'I am'. 'Drills' is likely a typo for 'reels'.

× On Internet eyes just scrolling over Facebook reels or Instagram drills.

✓ On the Internet, I am just scrolling over Facebook reels or Instagram reels.

The pronoun 'eyes' is incorrect here; it should be 'I am' to indicate the subject performing the action.

× Now it is yes, I'm used. I wished actually, most of the time.

✓ Now, yes, I am used to it. Actually, I wish I didn't spend most of the time online.

The original sentence is unclear and has tense errors. 'I'm used' should be 'I am used to it' to express habit. 'I wished' should be 'I wish' to express a present desire. Also, the sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× Now I just can't think think my life without Internet because as I said, I. Spend most of the time in my day in Internet.

✓ Now I just can't think of my life without the Internet because, as I said, I spend most of my day on the Internet.

The sentence has repetition ('think think'), missing prepositions ('think of'), and article errors ('the Internet'). Also, 'in my day in Internet' is incorrect; it should be 'most of my day on the Internet'.

× Now I just can't think think my life without Internet because as I said, I. Spend most of the time in my day in Internet.

✓ Now I just can't think of my life without the Internet because, as I said, I spend most of my day on the Internet.

'Internet' requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× I spend most of the time in my day in Internet.

✓ I spend most of my day on the Internet.

The correct preposition to use with 'Internet' is 'on', not 'in'. Also, 'most of the time in my day' is awkward; 'most of my day' is better.

× I watch a many videos.

✓ I watch many videos.

The phrase 'a many' is incorrect. 'Many' is used without 'a' when referring to countable plural nouns.