Internet— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and word choice. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I started using the internet when I got my phone in grade 10. Using the internet is important to me because I can find information both inside and outside my country. Also, it helps me stay updated with important news."

Ejemplo: I started using the internet when I got my phone in grade 10. Using the internet is important to me because I can find information both inside and outside my country. Also, it helps me stay updated with important news.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Avoid short incomplete sentences. For example, say "I go online about three times a day because I need to study on many websites. Additionally, I use the internet to improve my knowledge and get the latest information."

Ejemplo: I go online about three times a day because I need to study on many websites. Additionally, I use the internet to improve my knowledge and get the latest information.

Sugerencia: Focus on clear and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say "I remember when I was a child, my parents did not allow me to use the internet much because they said it would interrupt my studying. Also, they were worried it might harm my eyes."

Ejemplo: I remember when I was a child, my parents did not allow me to use the internet much because they said it would interrupt my studying. Also, they were worried it might harm my eyes.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more fluent and natural by correcting grammar and linking ideas. For example, say "Yes, I think I spend too much time online every day because I need to study using websites and apps. Studying online is easier than going to school because I can easily record and review lessons."

Ejemplo: Yes, I think I spend too much time online every day because I need to study using websites and apps. Studying online is easier than going to school because I can easily record and review lessons.

Sugerencia: Try to complete your sentences and use clear vocabulary. Use linking words to organize your ideas. For example, say "Without the internet, I would rely on personal meetings and traditional communication like reading books, newspapers, or talking face to face. Although it might be less convenient, it would help us stay connected. Additionally, it might encourage me to be more social."

Ejemplo: Without the internet, I would rely on personal meetings and traditional communication like reading books, newspapers, or talking face to face. Although it might be less convenient, it would help us stay connected. Additionally, it might encourage me to be more social.

× I started using the Internet when I had a phone since I was in grade 10.

✓ I started using the Internet when I got a phone in grade 10.

The phrase 'had a phone since I was in grade 10' is incorrect because 'since' requires a starting point and the past perfect 'had' is not appropriate here. Using 'got a phone in grade 10' correctly indicates the time when the action started.

× Spending time on Internet is very important for me because I can get information inside the country or outside the country.

✓ Spending time on the Internet is very important for me because I can get information from inside or outside the country.

The phrase 'on Internet' needs the definite article 'the' before 'Internet'. Also, 'get information inside the country or outside the country' is better expressed as 'get information from inside or outside the country' to correctly use prepositions.

× Additionally, I can guide the hard new that is very important for me too.

✓ Additionally, I can find the hard news that is very important for me too.

The word 'guide' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is likely 'find' or 'get'. Also, 'hard new' should be 'hard news'. This corrects the pronoun and noun usage for clarity.

× I often spend time online. Three times a day because I need to study on many websites.

✓ I often spend time online, about three times a day, because I need to study on many websites.

The sentence is fragmented and 'Three times a day' should be connected properly to the previous sentence for clarity and correct adverb placement.

× To improve my knowledge additionally.

✓ Additionally, I study to improve my knowledge.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. Reordering and adding these elements corrects the sentence structure.

× I can get everything new on the online.

✓ I can get all the new information online.

'On the online' is incorrect; 'online' does not need 'the'. Also, 'everything new' is better expressed as 'all the new information' for clarity.

× My parents don't want me to spend time on. Internet too much because they saying it will.

✓ My parents didn't want me to spend too much time on the Internet because they said it would

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the context is past, 'don't want' should be 'didn't want' and 'they saying' should be 'they said'. Also, 'on. Internet' has a misplaced period and missing article.

× Interrupt me my studying.

✓ interrupt my studying.

The phrase 'Interrupt me my studying' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'interrupt my studying' without 'me'.

× And I think my trees are will get bad so.

✓ And I think my grades will get bad too.

'My trees' is incorrect; likely intended 'my grades'. Also, 'are will get' is incorrect verb construction; 'will get' suffices. 'So' should be 'too' for addition.

× Yes, I think I definitely spend too much time online every day because.

✓ Yes, I think I definitely spend too much time online every day because

The sentence ends abruptly with a period after 'because' which is incorrect. It should continue or the period removed.

× I need to study online on the website or using app additionally.

✓ I need to study online on websites or use apps as well.

The phrase 'using app additionally' is awkward and ungrammatical. Correcting to 'use apps as well' improves clarity and grammar.

× I'm study online can be easier than.

✓ Studying online can be easier than going to school.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and incomplete. Using the gerund 'Studying' and completing the comparison makes it correct.

× Go to study at school because I can easily record an after picture.

✓ Going to school because I can easily record and review lessons.

'Record an after picture' is unclear and likely incorrect. The intended meaning is probably recording lessons or lectures. Also, 'Go to study at school' is awkward; 'Going to school' is better.

× Without Internet, I would probably rely on my personal meeting.

✓ Without the Internet, I would probably rely on personal meetings.

'Personal meeting' should be plural 'personal meetings' and 'the Internet' requires the definite article.

× Like communication such as grading book, newspaper or talking face to face with people, it would be more convenient and we can stay connected and stay in touch with other.

✓ For communication, such as using a grade book, newspaper, or talking face to face with people, it would be less convenient, and we would find it harder to stay connected and in touch with others.

The original sentence is confusing and contradictory. 'Like communication such as' is redundant. Also, 'it would be more convenient' contradicts the context of lacking internet. 'Other' should be 'others'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× Additionally, it might encourage me to.

✓ Additionally, it might encourage me to interact more with people in person.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object or verb phrase after 'to'. Completing the sentence clarifies the meaning.