Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more concise and correct tense and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., “used to” and “practice” repeated) and correct verb forms (e.g., “did not have” / “I had”).

Ejemplo: I didn’t have a full-size bike as a child, but I had a small training cycle with two stabilizing wheels. After a few years my parents removed the supports, and that helped me become confident and skilled at cycling.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence, then support it with two clear reasons using linking words (for example, “because” and “for instance”). Reduce fillers like “uh” and avoid vague phrases such as “each and every.” Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., “traffic congestion” instead of “stuck over there”).

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people choose motorcycles because they are cheaper and easier to park, and they help riders avoid heavy traffic congestion in busy cities.

× As far as I remember I do not have a bike but I used to have one small cycle on which I used to practice my practice it on daily basis and it do had support of two wheels on both the sides.

✓ As far as I remember I did not have a bike, but I used to have a small cycle on which I practiced daily; it had support of two wheels on both sides.

The speaker mixes present tense 'do not have' with past-time expressions like 'used to'. Use past tense 'did not have' to match the past context. Remove redundant wording 'my practice it' and use 'practiced daily'. Use simple past 'it had' instead of ungrammatical 'do had'. Also use 'both sides' rather than 'both the sides' for natural phrasing.

× And after some years I removed that support and definitely that helped me a lot in being on being expert in cycling.

✓ After some years I removed those supports and they definitely helped me a lot in becoming an expert in cycling.

Number agreement and word choice: 'that support' is inconsistent if there were two supports (use 'those supports'). The phrase 'being on being expert' is ungrammatical; use 'becoming an expert'. Maintain consistent past tense with 'removed' and 'helped'.

× Uh, yes, definitely Bikes are really popular in my country as whenever I go out, I always see each and every bike, uh, where I go.

✓ Uh, yes, definitely bikes are really popular in my country; whenever I go out, I see bikes everywhere.

Capitalization error ('Bikes' should be lowercase) and wordiness/unnatural phrases like 'each and every bike' and 'where I go'. Simplify to 'see bikes everywhere' for natural, concise expression. Keep fillers like 'uh' to a minimum.

× And I think people prefer to uh, take the bikes with them because they think if they are going to any crowded places, then these would be much easier and convenient rather than cars because they will be struck over there for like too many much time.

✓ I think people prefer to take bikes because if they go to crowded places, bikes are much easier and more convenient than cars, which can get stuck there for a long time.

Awkward conjunction and conditional structure: use 'if they go to crowded places' rather than 'if they are going to any crowded places, then these would be'. Remove unnecessary fillers and article 'the' before 'bikes'. Use comparative structure 'more convenient than cars'. Express duration as 'for a long time' instead of 'too many much time'.