Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevap daha doğal ve akıcı olmalı; kısa da olsa tam bir cümle kurun, gereksiz duraksamalardan (umm, alıntı gibi) kaçının ve bir veya iki destekleyici detay ekleyin. Örneğin; bisikletinizin kimden geldiği, ne zaman kullandığınız ya da onunla hangi aktiviteleri yaptığınız gibi spesifik bilgi verin. Ayrıca zaman uyumuna dikkat edin (geçmişten bahsederken geçmiş zaman kullanın).

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was about eight years old. It was a red mountain bike that my parents bought me for my birthday, and I used it every day to ride around the neighborhood and visit friends.

Sugerencia: Cevap net bir neden ve ilgili detaylar içermeli; ‘I think because’ gibi eksik ifadelerden kaçının. Görüşünüzü belirtin, sonra bağlaçlarla sebepler veya örnekler verin. İlgili kelime dağarcığını kullanarak ‘popular’ sebebini somutlaştırın (ör. ulaşım, spor, çevre dostu). Kısa ve mantıklı bağlaçlar (because, because of, for example, moreover) kullanın.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and rental schemes, so students and office workers often choose cycling as a cheap and healthy option.

× Yes, I have. Umm I. Bike.

✓ 'Yes, I did. I had a bike.'

The student is answering a past question ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?') but uses the present tense 'have'. This is a tense error. Use the past simple 'did' for short answers and 'had' for the full sentence. Suggestion: For past experiences use 'did' for short answers (Yes, I did) and past simple for full sentences (I had a bike).

× Yes, I think because I'm enjoy and.

✓ 'Yes, I think so because I enjoy them.'

The student says 'I'm enjoy' which incorrectly combines present continuous auxiliary with base verb; the verb 'enjoy' should be in simple present for habits or general statements. Also the sentence is incomplete and lacks an object; 'bikes' or 'them' should be included. Suggestion: Use simple present 'I enjoy' for general opinions and include the object: 'I enjoy bikes' or 'I enjoy them.'