Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid awkward phrasing like "up until now that I'm an adult" and redundant words. Also keep to a maximum of about 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it from my grandfather, who taught me in our local park, and I still cycle regularly as an adult for exercise and short trips.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear viewpoint, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid short fragments like "Actually." and vague phrases such as "something like that." Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "obstructed by market stalls" or "occupied by parked vehicles").

Ejemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because many bike lanes are obstructed by market stalls and parked vehicles, so people find cycling inconvenient. As a result, most residents prefer motorbikes or cars for daily travel.

× Up until now that I'm an adult, I'm still riding a bike.

✓ Even now that I'm an adult, I still ride a bike.

The original sentence mixes awkward phrasing and the present continuous 'I'm still riding a bike' suggests a temporary action; a habitual action requires simple present 'I still ride a bike'. Replace 'Up until now that' with 'Even now that' for natural expression of continuity into the present. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and use natural time phrase ordering.

× Actually. We have designated bike lanes intended for cyclists and bikers to use, but instead of the cycling community using it, it is being used as like a parking area for vendors, something like that.

✓ Actually, we have designated bike lanes intended for cyclists to use, but instead of the cycling community using them, they are being used as parking areas for vendors.

The original has sentence fragment 'Actually.' and redundant or informal phrases ('as like', 'something like that') and incorrect pronoun number agreement ('bike lanes' is plural so pronouns should be plural). Also 'cyclists and bikers' is redundant; use one term. 'Using it' should be 'using them' to agree with plural 'bike lanes'. Use 'are being used' with plural 'they'. Remove filler phrases for clarity. Suggestion: combine into one sentence, correct pronoun number agreement, avoid fragments and filler words.