Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: The student did not answer the question. For Part 1, start with a direct topic sentence that addresses the question, then add one or two specific details. Keep responses natural, avoid single-word greetings, and aim for 2–4 sentences. Use linking words if you add details (for example: "and", "also", "because").

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was an old red bike that my parents gave me for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school every day. Because I practiced a lot, I became quite confident riding on busy streets.

Sugerencia: The answer is relevant but contains hesitation and repetition. Improve by removing fillers ("umm", "uh"), avoid repeating phrases, and add one specific reason or example using a linking word to make the response coherent. Keep to a maximum of 5 sentences and use varied vocabulary (e.g., "commuters", "exercise", "commonly seen").

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, I often see commuters cycling to work in the early morning and families riding in parks in the afternoon. This trend is supported by an increasing number of bike lanes in cities.

× Hello.

✓ Hello.

The student reply 'Hello.' is not grammatically incorrect, but it is contextually inappropriate as an answer to the examiner's question about having a bike as a child. No pronoun or grammatical error to correct; instead, the student should provide a relevant response (for example: 'Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.').

× Yes, I do. Umm, I always, uh, I always see many people ride by every day in the, uh, in the early morning and in the afternoon.

✓ Yes, I do. I always see many people riding by every day in the early morning and in the afternoon.

The original sentence uses 'see many people ride by', which is less natural than the progressive participle 'riding' after 'see' when describing an ongoing or habitual action. This concerns verb + -ing form (ID 8) and present tense usage (ID 6). According to the instruction to only correct types from the provided list, the primary issue is 'Verb + -ing form' (ID 8). Use 'seeing people riding' or 'see people riding' to indicate continuous/habitual action. Also remove unnecessary hesitations and duplicate 'I always' to improve fluency. Suggested improvement: 'Yes, I do. I always see many people riding by every day in the early morning and in the afternoon.'