Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, grammatically correct, and use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Correct tenses and subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'I insisted', 'my cousins had bikes'). Use linking words like 'however' to show contrast and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I kept asking my parents to buy me one, but they never agreed, so I often felt left out when my cousins rode their bikes. However, I enjoyed walking to friends' houses instead.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and follow with specific reasons or examples using linking words. Avoid unfinished phrases. For example, mention who uses bikes, why they are popular (cost, convenience), and where they are common.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips because they are cheap and convenient, and in cities with heavy traffic biking is often faster than driving.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

No change needed; sentence correctly uses past tense negative with did not + base verb. Keep as is.

× Actually, I always insist.

✓ Actually, I always insisted.

The student is referring to a habitual action in the past (as a child), so the verb should be in the past tense. Use insisted to match the past time frame (always + past habitual).

× I actually I kept insisting that my parents should get me a bike, but they never did.

✓ I actually kept insisting that my parents should get me a bike, but they never did.

Remove the extra repeated subject 'I' to correct sentence structure. The verbs 'kept insisting' and 'never did' correctly indicate past actions, so no tense change is needed; fix is structural (sentence redundancy).

× All my cousins was have a bike, but I didn't have bike.

✓ All my cousins had a bike, but I didn't have a bike.

Two issues: subject-verb agreement and article omission. 'Cousins' is plural so use the past form 'had' (not 'was have'). Also include the indefinite article 'a' before 'bike' in the second clause. Overall use simple past 'had' to match the past context.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country actually, when you.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, actually.

The fragment 'when you' is incomplete and unclear, creating a sentence structure error. Remove the fragment or clarify what follows (for example 'when you visit' or 'when you travel around'). Here the simplest correction is to remove the fragment and keep the sentence coherent.