Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Reduce hesitation words (umm) and repeated phrases. For example, briefly say whether you had a bike, why you didn't (if relevant), and mention a specific memory or feeling to make the answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bicycle as a child. Although many of my friends owned bikes, my family couldn’t afford one then, so I often watched them ride in the park and wished I could join them.

Sugerencia: Make the answer more specific and use linking words to structure your points. Start with a direct opinion, then give reasons and an example. Avoid vague phrases like “everywhere” and unnecessary repetition of 'popular'. Use a wider range of vocabulary (e.g., convenient, affordable, eco-friendly) to appear more precise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For instance, many students and shopkeepers cycle to school or work, and in some cities there are dedicated bike lanes that make cycling safer.

× I used to dream about having own bicycle as my peers also had it in their childhood, but unfortunately umm, I personally, I personally didn't have it.

✓ I used to dream about having my own bicycle since my peers had one in their childhood, but unfortunately I didn't.

The phrase 'having own bicycle' is missing the possessive adjective 'my' and needs natural preposition choice. This fits 'Verb + -ing form' because 'having' is used but the following noun phrase is incorrect. Correction: add 'my' before 'own bicycle' and change 'as' to 'since' for clarity; remove redundant 'personally' and 'it' for conciseness. Suggestion: say 'I used to dream about having my own bicycle' and avoid repetition.

× I think that bikes are popular everywhere because it is like a popular transport for any age of people, like children or adults can use bicycles in their usual life.

✓ I think that bikes are popular everywhere because they are a common form of transport for people of all ages; children and adults can use bicycles in everyday life.

The sentence incorrectly uses the singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'bikes' (plural). This is an incorrect use of pronouns. Also 'any age of people' is unnatural; use 'people of all ages.' 'Usual life' should be 'everyday life.' Correction: replace 'it' with 'they,' use 'people of all ages,' and 'everyday life.' Suggestion: ensure pronoun number matches the noun and prefer natural collocations like 'people of all ages' and 'everyday life.'