Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct simple errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and check verb forms and word choice (e.g., 'rode' not 'write', 'rode that bike mainly for fun', 'rode the second one to school every day'). Use linking words like 'then' or 'later' to show sequence.

Ejemplo: Yes. I had two bikes as a child. The first was a small balance bike I rode for fun in kindergarten, and later I had a larger bike in junior high that I rode to and from school every day.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and coherence: begin with a clear topic sentence, then support with specific reasons and use linking words. Correct phrases like 'bike-sharing' and avoid sentence fragments (don't start sentences with 'Because' alone). Make details specific (e.g., give typical distances or examples) and remove repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes. Bike-sharing has made bicycles a very popular and practical way to travel in Chinese cities. For example, many people use bikes to cover the short two- to three-kilometre trips between their homes and subway stations, which saves time compared with walking.

× The first one is when I was in kindergarten, but that is when I was very small and I rode that bike mainly for entertainment, to go into the park or play with my friends.

✓ The first one was when I was in kindergarten; I was very small then and I rode that bike mainly for entertainment, to go to the park or play with my friends.

The sentence mixes present tense 'is' with past context. Use past tense 'was' to match 'when I was in kindergarten'. Also replace 'to go into the park' with 'to go to the park' for correct preposition use and adjust punctuation for clarity.

× And the second one is when I was in junior high school, and I wrote that back every day to go to school and go home from school.

✓ The second one was when I was in junior high school, and I rode that back every day to go to school and to go home from school.

Again 'is' should be past 'was' to match the time frame. 'Wrote' is incorrect verb; the correct verb for using a bike is 'rode' (past of 'ride'). Add 'to' before 'go home' for parallel structure.

× Yes, and also with the emergence of bike to share, bike has become one of the most practical means of transportation in China, especially in large cities.

✓ Yes, with the emergence of bike-sharing, bikes have become one of the most practical means of transportation in China, especially in large cities.

Use the correct noun form 'bike-sharing' and plural 'bikes' to refer generally to bicycles. 'Has become' should be 'have become' to agree with plural 'bikes' (subject-verb agreement). This addresses quantifier/plural reference and agreement.

× Because there are also there are always some distance between your home to the let's say subway station.

✓ There is often some distance between your home and, let's say, the subway station.

Original has repetition 'there are also there are' and incorrect structure 'distance between your home to'. Use singular 'there is' with 'some distance' and the correct preposition 'between... and'. Add commas for the parenthetical 'let's say' and include definite article 'the' before 'subway station'.

× So if you go to subway station by walk, it would take a long.

✓ So if you walk to the subway station, it will take a long time.

Use the verb 'walk' rather than the phrase 'go ... by walk.' Include the article 'the' before 'subway station.' Use 'will' for general future implication and add the noun 'time' after 'a long' to complete the phrase.