Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer, grammatical and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add a brief specific reason using correct tense and linking words. Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition. Correct common errors: use past tense for childhood, say "I had a bike until I started primary school" and use "because" or "as" to give reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike until I started primary school. However, I stopped riding it because my schoolwork increased a lot and I had less free time.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give specific supporting details with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use present tense to describe current popularity and provide examples or statistics if possible. Say why they are popular (convenience, cost, health).

Ejemplo: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and office workers cycle to school or work every day, especially in smaller towns where traffic is light.

× I did have one, one I raised like 5 or 6, but when I went into my primary school I don't ride bikes anymore. Well actually since as the increasement of my assignments.

✓ I did have one; I rode it until I was about five or six, but when I started primary school I didn't ride bikes anymore because my assignments increased.

Multiple tense and word choice issues: 'raised like 5 or 6' is incorrect for age — use 'when I was about five or six' or 'until I was about five or six.' 'I don't ride bikes anymore' is present tense and contradicts the past context; change to past 'I didn't ride bikes anymore.' 'Since as the increasement of my assignments' is ungrammatical: use 'because my assignments increased' or 'due to an increase in my schoolwork.' Suggestions: keep consistent past tense when talking about past habits, use correct verbs ('ride' -> 'rode') and correct noun forms ('increase' not 'increasement'), and express age as 'when I was X.'

× Yes, certainly, definitely lot of lots of my peers rode bikes, uh, ride back Rd. ride back rider bikes every day for going to schools.

✓ Yes, certainly; a lot of my peers rode bikes or rode them back and forth every day to go to school.

Mixed tenses and incorrect phrases: the student uses both past 'rode' and present 'ride' and repeats words 'lot of lots.' Maintain past tense 'rode' for habitual past action. 'Ride back Rd. ride back rider bikes' is incoherent; likely meant 'rode them back and forth' or 'rode their bikes back and forth.' Use 'to go to school' rather than 'for going to schools.' Suggestions: simplify to 'a lot of my peers rode their bikes to school every day' and keep tense consistent.

× And it's quite a popular, quite a popular sport actually.

✓ And it's actually quite popular as a pastime/sport.

Repetition 'quite a popular, quite a popular' is redundant. Also calling everyday bike use a 'sport' may be odd; use 'popular' or 'popular pastime' or 'popular mode of transport.' Remove duplicate phrase and place adverb 'actually' before 'quite' or at end for natural emphasis. Suggestions: avoid repetition and choose the correct noun for context (pastime, mode of transport, activity).