Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more accurate with past tense and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, give a specific description, and include one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Correct grammar (e.g., "I had" not "I have") and remove duplicated words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was bright yellow with red stripes and small training wheels. I used to ride it in the street in front of my house, and sometimes I practiced tricks with my friends.

Sugerencia: Use present tense for general statements and give a specific reason or example. Begin with a clear topic sentence about popularity, then support it with a concrete reason and a linking word (e.g., "because" or "for example"). Correct verb forms ("go"→"went" for past; use "ride" or "riding" appropriately).

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, when I was a child my friends and I often rode our bikes to the park and sometimes held small races.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about having a bike when you were a child (past time). The sentence uses present simple 'have' but should use past simple 'had' to match the past context. Suggestion: use past tense verbs when referring to past situations (e.g., 'I had a bike').

× When I was a child it was a yellow a colored bike.

✓ When I was a child it was a yellow-colored bike.

There is an extra article 'a' and incorrect adjective order/formation. Use a single article before the noun and combine 'yellow' and 'colored' into a compound adjective 'yellow-colored' or simply 'yellow'. Suggestion: say 'a yellow bike' or 'a yellow-colored bike'. Also keep tense consistent for past descriptions.

× I I used to ride it in front of my house with my friends.

✓ I used to ride it in front of my house with my friends.

There is a repeated pronoun 'I I' which is a typographical/repetition error. 'Used to' correctly expresses a past habitual action; keep it and remove the duplicate. Suggestion: proofread to remove duplicate words.

× During my childhood I usually go out with my friends on the bike and we also do racing on it.

✓ During my childhood I usually went out with my friends on the bike and we also raced on it.

The clause refers to habitual actions in the past ('during my childhood'), so verbs should be in past tense: 'went' and 'raced' rather than present 'go' and 'do racing'. Also 'do racing on it' is awkward; use 'raced on it' or 'had races on it'. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits and choose natural collocations (e.g., 'went out', 'raced on it').