Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh, umm), correct grammar (use past tense consistently), and use precise vocabulary (small, sturdy, lasted).

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bike that I rode for several years. Although it was old, it was very sturdy because it was made of iron, so it lasted a long time. I remember using it every day to go to my friend’s house and around the neighborhood.

Sugerencia: Structure your response: give a clear opinion, then two specific reasons with linking words. Use formal vocabulary (popular, convenient, economical) and correct grammar (people choose bikes, they are cheaper than taxis). Remove fillers and repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, they are convenient for short trips to busy places like markets, so people can park easily. Secondly, they are economical because they cost much less to buy and run than a taxi. Therefore many people prefer bikes for everyday travel.

× It was a little and red bike uh, it was old, but gold and umm, it made of strong iron and I I ride it uh, couple of years.

✓ It was a small red bike; it was old but sturdy, and it was made of strong iron, and I rode it for a couple of years.

The original sentence uses 'made' without the auxiliary 'was' to form the passive (needs past participle with 'be'), and uses present tense 'ride' where past tense 'rode' is required. Also 'little and red' is unnatural adjective order and 'gold' seems intended as 'good' or 'sturdy'; I corrected to 'small red' and 'sturdy' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'was made of' for passive constructions and use simple past for completed actions in the past (I rode). Use natural adjective order (size before color).

× When you wanna go to market uh, 100% you will choose the bikes because that's that's, that is comfortable and economic and also useful for your wallet and taxis is expensive, but.

✓ When you want to go to the market, 100% you will choose a bike because it is comfortable, economical, and good for your wallet, but taxis are expensive.

Errors: 'wanna' is informal and resolved to 'want to'; 'market' needs 'the market' (specific place); 'choose the bikes' incorrectly uses plural when general singular 'a bike' or plural 'bikes' with matching verbs is needed; 'that's ... that is' is redundant; 'economic' should be 'economical' as an adjective for cost; 'taxis is expensive' has subject-verb agreement error (plural 'taxis' with singular verb). Suggestions: use 'a bike' for a typical choice or 'bikes' with plural context, use 'economical', and use 'taxis are expensive' for correct agreement.