Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, grammatically correct and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and pronouns, and avoid unnecessary details. Use linking words if adding one supporting detail. Give a brief specific example or frequency. For instance, correct tense and phrasing: “No, I didn’t have my own bike as a child.” Then add one supporting detail: “I often borrowed one from a neighbor to ride to school.”

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. We couldn’t afford one, so I often borrowed a neighbor’s bike to ride to school.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence, use correct comparatives and articles, and add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrasing like “more cheaper.” Use vocabulary relevant to transport and health. For example, say: “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Then give two concise reasons with linking words: cost and health or convenience.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are much cheaper than cars and motorcycles. Also, many people prefer them for short commutes since they are faster in congested areas and good for exercise.

× Held I didn't have a bike when I was a child because we are poor and we lack of money.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because we were poor and lacked money.

The original starts with an unnecessary word 'Held' and mixes tenses and incorrect verb forms. Remove 'Held'. Use past tense 'were' for 'we' and past simple 'lacked' rather than 'we lack of money'. Also remove the preposition 'of' after 'lack' because 'lack' as a transitive verb takes a direct object. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for childhood descriptions and use 'lack' as 'lacked money'.

× I often borrow a bike in our neighborhood and I use it in going to school.

✓ I often borrowed a bike from our neighbors and used it to go to school.

The context is past habitual action, so verbs should be in past tense: 'borrowed' and 'used'. Preposition 'from' is more natural than 'in' for borrowing from people, and 'go to school' should be expressed as the infinitive 'to go' rather than 'in going'. Suggestion: for repeated past actions, use 'often' with past simple and 'borrow from' and 'use to do'.

× Bike is popular in our country because it is more cheaper than cars and motorcycles.

✓ Bicycles are popular in our country because they are cheaper than cars and motorcycles.

Use plural 'Bicycles' or 'Bikes' with plural verb 'are' for general statements. 'More cheaper' is incorrect because 'cheaper' already expresses comparison; do not add 'more'. Also change 'it' to 'they' to match the plural subject. Suggestion: use plural subject-verb agreement and 'cheaper' without 'more'.

× They often use it in going to their work faster and it is actually helpful in our daily life because it helps in exercising.

✓ People often use them to get to work more quickly, and they are actually helpful in daily life because they help with exercise.

Pronoun references are unclear and mismatched: 'They' followed by 'it' is inconsistent. Use 'People' or 'Many people' as the subject and 'them' to refer to bicycles. 'In going to their work faster' is awkward; use 'to get to work more quickly'. For 'helps in exercising', use 'help with exercise' or 'help with exercising'. Ensure pronoun number agreement and clearer phrasing. Suggestion: maintain consistent plural pronouns and use natural collocations like 'get to work' and 'help with exercise'.