Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use correct tense and word order, start with a clear topic sentence, and limit to 2–4 concise sentences. Add one specific detail about when you started riding and why. Use linking words like "but" or "however" correctly.

Ejemplo: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I have one now and I usually ride it to university because it is faster and cheaper than public transport.

Sugerencia: Improve fluency and vocabulary accuracy: avoid filler words, correct verbs and nouns, and give a specific reason or example. Use linking words (for example, because) and avoid repetition. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among young people. For example, many students prefer sports bikes because they are fast and look stylish. I am a young person myself and I ride a sports bike to meet friends and run errands.

× To be honest I don't had a bike when was I am a child, but nowadays I have a bike and I usually ride it for some purpose, especially when I go to my university.

✓ To be honest I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but nowadays I have a bike and I usually ride it for various purposes, especially when I go to university.

The original sentence mixes present and past forms incorrectly. 'don't had' is ungrammatical because the auxiliary 'do' in negative past requires 'did not' + base verb, so use 'didn't have' (Past tense issue). Also the clause 'when was I am a child' has incorrect word order and unnecessary present tense; correct form is 'when I was a child' (Sentence structure/tense error related to past tense). 'for some purpose' is awkward and noncount; use 'for various purposes' or 'for a purpose'. 'my university' is acceptable but 'university' without 'my' is more natural in this context. Suggestion: use 'didn't have' for past negative, place subject before verb in subordinate clause 'when I was a child', and choose natural noun phrases like 'various purposes' or 'when I go to university'.

× Absolutely. Uh, bikes are popular in my country, especially the sports bikes are very popular to young people.

✓ Absolutely. Bikes are popular in my country; in particular, sports bikes are very popular with young people.

The sentence repeats 'popular' and uses an incorrect preposition 'to' with 'popular'. The correct construction is 'popular with' (Incorrect use of prepositions, categorized here under Present tense issue because present-state is described). Also omit unnecessary filler 'Uh' and avoid repetition by rephrasing. Suggestion: use 'popular with young people' and avoid repeating 'popular' twice in same clause.

× However, I am also a young people and I usually write sports bike and I love it.

✓ However, I am also a young person and I usually ride a sports bike and I love it.

'Young people' is plural and cannot be used with singular verb 'am'; use 'young person' (Incorrect use of pronouns/noun number — Singular and plural issue as well). 'write sports bike' is a typo/wrong verb; correct verb is 'ride' (verb choice), and 'a sports bike' needs an article. Suggestion: use 'a young person' for singular, 'ride a sports bike' for the activity, and include the article 'a' before 'sports bike'.