Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, correct grammar and pronunciation, and give a clear reason. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verbs (e.g., "write" → "ride").

Ejemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I was too small and my parents thought it would be unsafe, so they didn't allow me to ride one until I was older.

Sugerencia: Give a direct opinion, avoid hesitations, use accurate statistics only if sure, and provide a clear example. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and correct plural and quantifier usage (people, percent).

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for daily transport. For example, people often ride bikes to travel short distances to work or the market, especially in crowded urban areas.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was child because I was at that time I was a little small and my parents did not allow me to write a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because at that time I was a little small and my parents did not allow me to ride a bike.

Multiple sentence structure and word choice issues: missing article before 'child' (use 'a child'), redundant phrasing ('I was at that time I was' -> 'at that time I was'), incorrect verb 'write' should be 'ride'. Also 'a little small' is informal but acceptable; 'quite small' or 'too small' would be clearer. Suggestion: keep a clear clause order: state the time ('when I was a child' or 'at that time'), give the reason concisely, and use the correct verb 'ride' for bicycles. Grammar problem type ID:26

× As I think bikes are well known in my country because uh, nowadays more than 99% peoples are uh, riding bike through their daily life, which for example when we uh, walk at a distance.

✓ I think bikes are common in my country because nowadays more than 99% of people ride bikes in their daily lives, for example when they need to travel a short distance.

Quantifier and noun usage errors: 'more than 99% peoples' should be 'more than 99% of people' because percent requires 'of' and 'people' is the correct plural noun. 'Riding bike' should be 'ride bikes' or 'ride a bike'; use simple present for habitual actions. 'Through their daily life' is awkward; use 'in their daily lives'. The relative clause 'which for example when we walk at a distance' is ungrammatical—replace with a clear example clause like 'for example when they need to travel a short distance.' Suggestion: use 'more than X% of people' and maintain subject-verb agreement and natural collocations like 'ride bikes' and 'daily life(s)'. Grammar problem type ID:14