Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct tenses, fix grammar and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Mention when you got the bikes and why they mattered. Limit to 3–4 sentences and complete your final thought.

Ejemplo: Yes. I had two bikes as a child because my father bought them for my birthday. They were important to me because they let me explore the neighborhood and exercise regularly. As a result, I learned to be independent and made many friends while riding around.

Sugerencia: Provide a clearer opinion with specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas. Correct grammar and reduce hesitations. Give a brief example or comparison to strengthen your answer. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips and exercise, especially in cities where traffic is heavy. For example, commuters often cycle to work to save time and keep fit.

× I have two bikes my my father bought me in my anniversary.

✓ I had two bikes that my father bought me for my birthday.

The sentence has plural/number and article issues and wrong noun phrase. 'I have' should be past 'I had' to match 'when I was a child' (tense consistency). 'my my' is repetition; include 'that' to connect clauses. 'in my anniversary' is incorrect collocation; use 'for my birthday'. Use 'two bikes' is fine but tense and preposition needed.

× In my birthday I was very happy to have them because they helped me to.

✓ On my birthday I was very happy to have them because they helped me.

Use 'on' with 'birthday' not 'in'. 'to have them' is acceptable but 'to' at end is unnecessary and ungrammatical here. Also remove trailing 'to'. The verb 'helped' correctly in past; keep consistent past narrative.

× There is a lot of bikes in our area.

✓ There are a lot of bikes in our area.

Subject-verb agreement with 'there is/are': 'bikes' is plural so use 'there are'. Also 'a lot of' before plural noun is fine.

× Yes, when I was a child. I have two bikes my my father bought me in my anniversary.

✓ When I was a child, I had two bikes that my father bought me for my birthday.

Combine fragments into one sentence and correct article and tense: 'When I was a child' should lead into main clause; 'I had' matches past. 'my anniversary' is wrong phrase; use 'my birthday'. Also remove duplicated 'my' and add comma after the introductory clause.

× people like to have some, some exercise and uh transport by themselves.

✓ People like to get some exercise and travel by themselves.

Use 'get some exercise' or 'do some exercise' rather than 'have some exercise'. 'Transport by themselves' is incorrect; use 'travel by themselves' or 'get around by themselves'. Also capitalize 'People' as sentence start and remove filler 'uh'.