Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct singular/plural and article use, and finish sentences fully. Use one or two brief supporting details and avoid trailing fragments. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., study, major, faculty) and link ideas with a short connector if needed.

Ejemplo: I am a student at Sophia University in Tokyo. I major in English in the Faculty of Foreign Studies, where I study foreign cultures and languages.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer then add one or two specific supporting details. Fix proper nouns consistently and use correct verb patterns (e.g., 'I hope to learn' or 'I want to study'). Avoid long awkward clauses; break into two sentences and use linking words like 'and' or 'especially' correctly.

Ejemplo: I study at Sophia University in Yotsuya, Tokyo. I major in English and focus on foreign cultures and languages, especially Native American cultures and the issues of racism they face.

Sugerencia: This answer is generally good: clear opinion plus supporting reasons. Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement: 'provides'), use more natural phrasing ('quiet study areas' instead of 'silent environment'), and try to combine ideas with linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to sound more cohesive.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would definitely say it is a good place to study because the university provides an excellent environment. For example, there are well-equipped libraries and quiet study areas, and the professors are very supportive.

Sugerencia: Be specific and use correct word choices and sentence structure. Start with a clear statement of the change you want, then give a concise reason and one practical suggestion. Avoid unclear words like 'praise to make' and redundant phrases ('foreign international'). Use linking words such as 'so that' or 'because'.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like the university to create an international community space so that local and international students can meet and communicate. This would give us more opportunities to practice languages and learn about different cultures.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, organized response: state your main plan first, then add a second step with linking words like 'then' or 'after that'. Use correct verb forms ('study abroad', 'I would like to') and more natural phrasing ('research Native American cultures' or 'work with a professor who researches'). Be specific about purpose and timeline if possible.

Ejemplo: First, I plan to study abroad in Canada to learn more about Indigenous peoples, their cultures and languages. After that, I would like to continue my studies at Sophia University with a professor who researches Native American cultures.

× I am a students at the Sophia University in Japan.

✓ I am a student at Sophia University in Japan.

The noun 'students' is plural but the subject 'I' requires the singular noun 'student'. Also 'the' before 'Sophia University' is unnecessary in this context. Use the singular to match the singular subject and drop the article for proper university name usage. Suggestion: Replace plural noun with singular when the subject is singular and use 'Sophia University' without 'the'.

× I learn about foreign cultures and.

✓ I learn about foreign cultures.

The original sentence ends with an incomplete clause and uses present simple correctly but omits the object after 'and'. Removing the trailing 'and' completes the sentence. If intending to add another item, include it (for example, 'languages'). Suggestion: Complete the list or remove the trailing conjunction.

× I study at Sofia University in Yotsuya in Tokyo.

✓ I study at Sophia University in Yotsuya, Tokyo.

The university name was misspelled as 'Sofia' instead of 'Sophia'. Also include a comma between locality and city for clarity. This is primarily a proper noun correction; it also aligns with previously mentioned name. Suggestion: Use the correct proper noun spelling and standard punctuation for place names.

× I major in English in the Faculty of Foreign Studies and I pursue to learn foreign cultures and languages and especially Native American cultures and racism they experience.

✓ I major in English in the Faculty of Foreign Studies, and I am pursuing learning about foreign cultures and languages, especially Native American cultures and the racism they experience.

Problems: 'pursue to learn' is incorrect — use 'pursue learning' or 'am pursuing' + gerund. The sentence is long and needs commas. 'racism they experience' needs the article 'the' and clearer placement. Rewriting with present progressive 'am pursuing' and gerunds clarifies intent. Suggestion: Use 'pursue learning' or 'am pursuing' + gerund, add commas to separate ideas, and include 'the' before 'racism' when specifying a known phenomenon.

× I would definitely say that it is a good place to study. The university provide students a perfect environment for studying.

✓ I would definitely say that it is a good place to study. The university provides students with a perfect environment for studying.

Subject-verb agreement: 'university' is singular, so the verb must be 'provides' (related to ID 27 as well). Also the verb 'provide' requires the preposition 'with' when indicating what is provided to someone: 'provides students with'. Suggestion: Use 'provides' for singular subject and include 'with' after 'provide' when indicating what is given to students.

× They have libraries and places for studying in a silent environment, and the professors and teachers are very kind.

✓ They have libraries and quiet study spaces, and the professors are very kind.

The original is acceptable but wordy and has slight awkward phrasing 'places for studying in a silent environment'. 'Professors and teachers' is redundant; 'professors' suffices. Simplify phrases: 'quiet study spaces' is natural. Ensure subject-verb agreement remains correct. Suggestion: Use concise, natural collocations and avoid redundant nouns.

× Yes, I would like to praise to make changes in making a environmental community that we can exchange, we can communicate with foreign international students because we don't really have the opportunities to communicate with them.

✓ Yes, I would like to propose making an environmental community where we can interact and communicate with international students, because we don't really have opportunities to do so.

Errors: 'praise to make changes' is incorrect — likely 'propose' or 'suggest'. 'making a environmental' needs 'an' before vowel sound and 'environmental community' is odd but acceptable; 'where' is better than 'that we can exchange'. 'foreign international students' is redundant; use 'international students'. The clause 'we don't really have the opportunities to communicate with them' is wordy — use 'opportunities to do so'. Suggestion: Use correct verb ('propose'/'suggest'), correct article 'an', avoid redundancy, and use 'where' for place clauses.

× The first study plan is to go to study abroad in Canada to learn more about native indigenous people, cultures and languages, and the next I like to study deeper at Sophia University by the professor who research Native American.

✓ My first study plan is to study abroad in Canada to learn more about indigenous peoples, their cultures, and languages. Next, I would like to study more deeply at Sophia University with the professor who researches Native American topics.

Problems: 'native indigenous people' is redundant — use 'indigenous peoples'. 'the next I like to study deeper' is ungrammatical; use 'Next, I would like to'. 'by the professor who research' is incorrect: use 'with the professor who researches' (subject-verb agreement). Use plural 'peoples' or 'people' consistently and add possessive 'their' for cultures and languages. Suggestion: Use 'study abroad', prefer 'indigenous peoples', use 'would like to' for future intent, and correct subject-verb agreement with 'researches' and preposition 'with'.