Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Use correct grammar and give a clear, concise topic sentence. Correct subject-verb agreement and count nouns. Add one short detail if helpful. Keep under 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: I am a high school student. I study at a local public school and I am currently in the second year.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence and use a natural way to name the school. If the name is long, briefly say what kind of school it is and one detail about it using a linking word (e.g., "which").

Ejemplo: I study at Yang Ming Jiao Da Fu Zhong, which is a well-known high school in my city. It has a strong science program and many extracurricular clubs.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with specific reasons using linking words like "because" and "for example." Correct grammar (subject-verb, articles) and avoid hesitations. Limit to 2–3 supporting points.

Ejemplo: Yes, it's a great place to study because the teachers are experienced and supportive. For example, they offer extra help after class, and my classmates are friendly, which makes group work enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion and explain one specific change with reasons. Use linking words such as "because" or "for example." Be concise and correct grammar (singular/plural, word order).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see changes in the educational system because it focuses too much on exams. For example, I would prefer more project-based learning so students can develop practical skills.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct statement about your plans, then give specific reasons and use linking phrases like "because" or "so that." Avoid filler words and be precise about what you hope to gain.

Ejemplo: I plan to study abroad in Australia or the USA because I want to broaden my perspectives and improve my English. Studying there would give me exposure to international teaching methods and better career opportunities.

× I am a high school students.

✓ I am a high school student.

The noun 'student' should be singular to agree with the singular subject 'I' and the singular article 'a'. Use singular form 'student' after 'a'. Suggestion: Use 'a' + singular noun when referring to one person (a high school student).

× I study in high school that's known as Yang Ming Jiao Da Fu Zhong.

✓ I study at a high school that's known as Yang Ming Jiao Da Fu Zhong.

Use the preposition 'at' with 'study' to indicate the place of study; also include the indefinite article 'a' before 'high school'. The present tense 'study' is correct for current enrollment. Suggestion: Say 'study at a high school' to sound natural.

× Yes, obviously is I really love study in my school because there has the good teacher umm kind classmate and fun classes.

✓ Yes, obviously I really love studying at my school because there are good teachers, kind classmates, and fun classes.

Multiple issues: the extraneous 'is' should be removed; 'love study' requires the gerund 'studying'; use 'at' for location; 'there has' is incorrect — use 'there are' for plural existence; nouns need plurals: 'teachers' and 'classmates'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'I really love studying at my school' and 'there are' + plural nouns.

× I want the whole educational environments can change because in my country umm educational is for two for pursue in school.

✓ I want the whole educational environment to change because in my country education is focused on pursuing schooling for two years.

Use singular 'environment' when speaking of the system as a whole. The structure 'want ... to change' requires the infinitive 'to change' not 'can change'. 'Educational' used as an adjective should be 'education' as the noun. The phrase 'for two for pursue in school' is unclear; I corrected to 'focused on pursuing schooling for two years' based on probable meaning. Suggestion: Use 'I want the whole educational environment to change' and replace unclear phrases with a clear time or purpose.

× So I think that can be changed.

✓ So I think that it can be changed.

Add the pronoun 'it' as the subject of 'can be changed' to form a complete clause. The present tense modal 'can' is acceptable here. Suggestion: Include the subject 'it' when using 'can be changed'.

× Umm I prefer to go to abroad like Australia or USA so I can broaden myself.

✓ Umm I prefer to go abroad to countries like Australia or the USA so I can broaden my horizons.

Do not use 'go to abroad'; use 'go abroad'. Also 'prefer to go abroad to countries like...' is clearer. 'USA' should be preceded by 'the' when used as 'the USA'. 'Broaden myself' is unnatural; use 'broaden my horizons' or 'broaden my experiences'. Suggestion: Use 'go abroad' and idiomatic phrases like 'broaden my horizons'.

× Higher reasons and umm more global.

✓ for higher reasons and to become more global.

Sentence fragment: 'Higher reasons and more global' lacks clarity and a verb. Rephrase to show intent: 'for higher reasons' is vague but can be kept if clarified; add 'to become' to indicate purpose. 'More global' should be 'more globally aware' or 'more global in outlook.' Suggestion: Complete the sentence with an infinitive of purpose, e.g., 'to become more globally aware'.'