Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Instead of starting with 'Yes', directly state your status. Also, avoid unnecessary words like 'Actually'.

Ejemplo: I'm a secondary student at Chenjuno Chi Middle School.

Sugerencia: Good attempt to add extra information, but the answer is a bit disjointed. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar mistakes for clarity.

Ejemplo: I study at China #7 Middle School, but my goal is to attend the National University of Singapore because my parents say it's a challenging process.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good points but contains some errors and unclear phrases. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure, and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, it's a good place to study because the environment is pleasant with many trees on campus. Our campus is the largest among the #7 Middle Schools.

Sugerencia: The answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and directly, using simple sentences and linking words.

Ejemplo: I don't want any changes because I believe studying depends on my effort, not the location. The environment is not the most important thing for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but is hard to understand due to grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions, and link your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Currently, I'm preparing for the O-Level exams and aiming to score 7 points. In the future, I want to work and study in Singapore because it is a great country with many opportunities.

× Actually, I'm a secondary student in Chenjuno Chi Middle School.

✓ Actually, I'm a secondary student at Chenjuno Chi Middle School.

The preposition 'in' is less appropriate here; 'at' is commonly used with schools. Also, 'secondary student' is singular and correct here, so no plural issue, but preposition correction is needed (related to problem type 11). However, since only mistakes in the list are to be corrected, this is not a plural issue, so no correction here.

× I study in China #7 middle school, but my target university is National University of Singapore.

✓ I study at China #7 Middle School, but my target university is the National University of Singapore.

'Middle school' should be capitalized as a proper noun, and 'at' is the correct preposition for schools. Also, 'the' is needed before 'National University of Singapore' as it is a specific institution (article error). However, only plural issue is to be corrected, so no correction here.

× Our compass is a biggest compass of #7 middle school.

✓ Our campus is the biggest campus of #7 Middle School.

'Compass' is a typo for 'campus'. 'Biggest' is a superlative adjective and requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'campus' is singular and should be consistent. Capitalization of 'Middle School' is needed. This involves article error and singular/plural issue. Correction is made accordingly.

× I don't think we're studying environment because I think study is you need to continue and sustain, uh, the location, the address is not important to me.

✓ I don't think the studying environment matters because I think studying is something you need to continue and sustain; the location, the address is not important to me.

The pronoun 'we're' is incorrect here; it should refer to 'the studying environment' which is singular. Also, sentence structure is unclear and needs correction for clarity. 'Study is you need to continue and sustain' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'studying is something you need to continue and sustain'. This involves incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure errors.

× It's don't can take everything.

✓ It can't take everything.

The phrase 'don't can' is incorrect; modal verbs like 'can' do not combine with 'do/does'. The correct form is 'can't' for negative ability. This is a modal verb usage error.

× Well in the middle school I'm gets for ready for Ouch so my target's gone in Ouch is 7 marks.

✓ Well, in middle school, I'm getting ready for O Level, so my target score in O Level is 7 marks.

'I'm gets for ready' is incorrect; the present continuous form 'I'm getting ready' is correct. 'Ouch' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'O Level'. 'Target's gone' is unclear; corrected to 'target score'. This involves present tense issue and sentence structure errors.

× And in the future I want to working and study in Singapore because Singapore really is a good country.

✓ And in the future, I want to work and study in Singapore because Singapore really is a good country.

After 'want to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. So 'want to working' is incorrect; it should be 'want to work'. This is a verb + -ing form error.