Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is informative but a bit lengthy and slightly repetitive. Try to keep your response concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add one or two supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: I am currently a 12th-grade student at a CBC board school in Kerala. Since my board exams are in two months, I am focusing on practicing hard to prepare well.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but contains some redundancy, such as 'small town or a municipality' and 'quiet place and a peaceful place'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating similar words.

Ejemplo: I study in Cardamangalam, a small municipality in the Ernakulam district of Kerala. It is a quiet and peaceful place, especially compared to busy metropolitan cities, which makes it ideal for studying.

Sugerencia: Your answer is positive but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'best' twice. Provide specific reasons to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a great place to study because my school has experienced teachers who provide quality education. They make sure we understand the subjects thoroughly, which helps us learn effectively.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and repetition. Use correct comparative forms and avoid repeating the same reason. Also, try to explain why stricter rules would help improve your English.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like my school to have stricter rules about speaking English because currently, students often speak in their native language. This change would encourage us to practice English more and improve our skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly, avoid fillers like 'uh' and 'umm', and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ejemplo: I plan to either study abroad or continue my education in Kerala, depending on my IELTS score. The institution I want to join requires a minimum score of 5.5. Currently, I am attending coaching classes here in Kerala to improve my chances of scoring well.

× I'm studying in 12th grade in the CBC board school in Kerala right now and I have my board exams coming in two months and I'm really practicing for them right now.

✓ I'm studying in the 12th grade at a CBC board school in Kerala right now, and I have my board exams coming up in two months. I'm really practicing for them right now.

The original sentence has minor issues with article usage and prepositions, which affect the present tense description. 'In 12th grade' should be 'in the 12th grade' to specify the grade level. 'In the CBC board school' should be 'at a CBC board school' to correctly indicate the place of study. Also, adding commas improves clarity. These corrections help maintain proper present tense narration and clarity.

× I study in a small town or a municipality called Cardamangalam in the Ernakulam district of Kerala.

✓ I study in a small town, or municipality, called Cardamangalam in the Ernakulam district of Kerala.

The phrase 'a small town or a municipality' is better expressed as 'a small town, or municipality,' to avoid redundancy and improve flow. The preposition 'in' is correctly used here, but punctuation helps clarify the meaning.

× It's a quiet place and a peaceful place to study as well comparatively comparing to the metropolitan cities.

✓ It's a quiet and peaceful place to study, especially compared to metropolitan cities.

The original sentence uses redundant phrases 'quiet place and a peaceful place' and awkward comparative phrases 'comparatively comparing to.' Simplifying to 'quiet and peaceful place' and using 'especially compared to' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I would like my school to have more stricter rules on speaking English because my English is generally poor because they're not much strict about speaking in English.

✓ Yes, I would like my school to have stricter rules about speaking English because my English is generally poor since they are not very strict about speaking English.

The phrase 'more stricter' is incorrect; 'stricter' alone suffices (double comparative error). 'They're' (they are) is used incorrectly to refer to the school; 'they are' should be 'the school is' or 'they are' referring to staff. Also, 'not much strict' should be 'not very strict.' These corrections improve pronoun use and adjective form.

× I'm planning on either going to abroad or studying in Kerala itself.

✓ I'm planning on either going abroad or studying in Kerala itself.

The phrase 'going to abroad' is incorrect; 'abroad' does not require the preposition 'to.' The correct phrase is 'going abroad.' This is a common prepositional error.

× It will depend upon my I score.

✓ It will depend upon my score.

The phrase 'my I score' is incorrect and likely a typographical error. Removing the extra 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× Uh, I the institution that I want to go, they demand 5.5 range umm and I'm also doing team coaching right now in Kerala.

✓ The institution that I want to go to demands a 5.5 score, and I'm also doing team coaching right now in Kerala.

The original sentence is fragmented and has misplaced words ('I the institution'). Correcting the sentence structure to a clear subject-verb-object order improves clarity and grammatical correctness.