Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，表达应更自然流畅。可以简洁明了地介绍自己是学生和专业。

Ejemplo: I am currently a graduate student at National Charlotte University, majoring in Architecture Design.

Sugerencia: 回答中信息混乱且重复，地名表达不清晰。应简洁明了地说明学校和城市，避免犹豫和重复。

Ejemplo: I study at National Chow Town University, which is located in Xingqiu, a city near Taipei.

Sugerencia: 回答中表达不够准确，句子结构不完整。应更清晰地描述学习环境和特色，使用连词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: Absolutely, it is an excellent place to study architecture because we focus on digital design, which is different from other universities.

Sugerencia: 回答没有直接回应问题，内容偏离主题且表达不清晰。应直接说明是否希望学校改进，并具体说明改进内容。

Ejemplo: I would like the university to improve its library facilities to provide more resources for students.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达含糊。应完整描述未来计划，避免语法错误和犹豫。

Ejemplo: After finishing my thesis, I plan to work for a while and study for the National Architecture Certificate to advance my career.

× I'm currently the student at National Charlotte University and study in UH, the Graduate School of Architecture and UH my major in UH Architecture Design.

✓ I'm currently a student at National Charlotte University and study at UH, the Graduate School of Architecture, and my major is Architecture Design at UH.

冠词使用错误。'the student' 应改为 'a student'，因为这里指的是某个学生而非特指的唯一学生。'study in UH' 应改为 'study at UH'，因为通常用 'at' 表示在某个学校学习。'my major in UH Architecture Design' 结构不完整，应改为 'my major is Architecture Design at UH'。

× Like I said, I study in National Chow Town University in Xingqiu, the city below of Taipei and uh, the university located in the Shenzhou city, uh, beside of the Tsinghua University.

✓ Like I said, I study at National Chow Town University in Xingqiu, a city south of Taipei, and the university is located in Shenzhou city, beside Tsinghua University.

介词使用错误。'study in National Chow Town University' 应改为 'study at National Chow Town University'，表示在某个学校学习。'the city below of Taipei' 应改为 'a city south of Taipei'，'below of' 不正确。'beside of the Tsinghua University' 应改为 'beside Tsinghua University'，'beside' 后不加 'of'。

× Absolutely, I think the environment is excellent place to study in architecture.

✓ Absolutely, I think the environment is an excellent place to study architecture.

形容词使用错误。'excellent place' 前缺少冠词 'an'。'study in architecture' 应改为 'study architecture'，因为 'study' 后直接加学科名词。

× Unlike the other school of architecture in Charlton University, we usually study the future architecture about digital way.

✓ Unlike other schools of architecture at Charlton University, we usually study future architecture in a digital way.

介词使用错误。'other school' 应为复数 'other schools'。'in Charlton University' 应改为 'at Charlton University'。'about digital way' 应改为 'in a digital way'。

× Because Charlton University is the National School in Taiwan, so we got a lot of support of government, uh, such as the environment or equipment or uh, something technology is a very mature to, to use.

✓ Because Charlton University is the national school in Taiwan, we get a lot of support from the government, such as environment, equipment, and mature technology to use.

句子结构错误。'Because... so...' 结构重复，应去掉 'so'。'support of government' 应改为 'support from the government'。'something technology is a very mature to use' 结构混乱，应改为 'mature technology to use'。

× After I finish the thesis in Graduate School, I think I will get to work for a while and at the same time, uh, study for the National Certificate of Architecture, and after the architecture certificate I will.

✓ After I finish my thesis in graduate school, I think I will work for a while and at the same time study for the National Certificate of Architecture. After getting the architecture certificate, I will...

未来时态和句子结构错误。'I will get to work' 应改为 'I will work'，更自然。'after the architecture certificate I will' 句子不完整，应改为 'After getting the architecture certificate, I will...'。