Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer wa ni shizen de, shikashi, fukuzatsu na kotoba ya fukuzatsu na bunshou no tsukaikata ni yori, rikai ga muzukashiku natte imasu. Motto seikaku ni, shourai no jikan ya keiken ni tsuite no shousai o tsukeru to yoi desu. Mata, fukuzatsu na kotoba no tsukaikata o sakete, motto kantan de wakariyasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai.

Ejemplo: I work as a senior engineer at a construction company that focuses on road projects. I have been working there for two years. My job is demanding because I manage several tasks and supervise the work. Although it is stressful, I enjoy the challenges it brings.

Sugerencia: Kotae wa chokusetsu shite imasu ga, tokidoki fukuzatsu na kotoba ya imi ga fumei na kotoba ga arimasu. Tokuni, 'simultaneous' no you na kotoba wa kontekusuto ni awanai node, yoku rikai dekiru kotoba o erande kudasai. Mata, bun no tsuzuki o rikai shiyasuku suru tame ni, setsuzoku-shi o tsukatte kudasai.

Ejemplo: I studied at Himalaya College of Engineering in Kathmandu. The building is very tall, and the college has many qualified and friendly teachers. Studying there was challenging but rewarding.

Sugerencia: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, bunpou to kotoba no tsukaikata ni shoujiki-sa ga tarimasen. 'Even though even you have any talents about the your curriculum' no you na fumei na hyougen wa kaizen ga hitsuyou desu. Motto meikaku ni, rikai shi yasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a very good place to study because the teachers are qualified and very helpful. They assist students with the curriculum even during nights or their free time.

Sugerencia: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, 'change up one thing about the colors' no you na hyougen wa fumei de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Motto meikaku ni, shousai o tsukete setsuzoku-shi o tsukatte kotaete kudasai. Mata, bun no nagasa o 5 bun shika tsukawanai you ni ki o tsukete kudasai.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to change the library. It is too small and overcrowded. I want to expand the seating area so more people can study there comfortably.

Sugerencia: Kotae wa fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. 'I haven't choose 18' ya 'purchase my master degree' no you na fumei na hyougen wa kaizen ga hitsuyou desu. Motto seikaku ni, shourai no keikaku o setsumei shi, kantan de wakariyasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai.

Ejemplo: In the future, I want to study for a master's degree in civil engineering, focusing on transportation. I plan to go to a European country to pursue this degree.

× Umm have been working uh they are for a couple of year and the work is very demanding.

✓ I have been working there for a couple of years and the work is very demanding.

The sentence lacks the subject 'I' before 'have been working', and 'they are' is incorrect; it should be 'there'. Also, 'year' should be plural 'years' because it refers to more than one year.

× I have to handle the side work and everything is under my control.

✓ I have to handle the side work, and everything is under my control.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no plural or singular issue detected here.

× You know, it is a very high rise build, having a lot of qualified teacher who were very friendly and uh, simultaneous.

✓ You know, it is a very high-rise building, having a lot of qualified teachers who are very friendly and, uh, supportive.

'Build' should be 'building' as a noun. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match 'a lot of'. 'Were' should be 'are' to maintain present tense. 'Simultaneous' is incorrect here; likely intended 'supportive' or similar.

× Yeah, it is a very good place to study in regards or because of the qualified teacher who are so helpful.

✓ Yeah, it is a very good place to study because of the qualified teachers who are so helpful.

The phrase 'in regards or because of' is incorrect; 'because of' is appropriate. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with 'qualified' and context.

× Even though even you have any talents about the your curriculum, they will be definitely helping you even in the night or the off time.

✓ Even if you have any difficulties with your curriculum, they will definitely help you even at night or during off time.

'Talents about the your curriculum' is incorrect; likely meant 'difficulties with your curriculum'. 'They will be definitely helping you' is awkward; 'they will definitely help you' is better. 'In the night or the off time' should be 'at night or during off time'.

× I do not like the space of the library. I find it very narrow, overcrowded.

✓ I do not like the space of the library. I find it very narrow and overcrowded.

Adding 'and' improves sentence flow; no plural/singular issue here.

× So I always want to expand the seat and the space so, so a lot of his number of people can be there studying at once.

✓ So I always want to expand the seating and the space so that a large number of people can study there at once.

'Seat' should be 'seating' to refer to capacity. 'A lot of his number of people' is incorrect; 'a large number of people' is correct. 'Can be there studying' is better as 'can study there'.

× When I want to go to the euro for one of the best country, I haven't choose 18 but I want to purchase my master degree in in discipline related to civil engineering or I I guess it's precisely about the transportation that's I have been trying to.

✓ I want to go to Europe, one of the best countries. I haven't chosen yet, but I want to pursue my master's degree in a discipline related to civil engineering, specifically transportation, which I have been trying to study.

'When I want to go' is awkward; simple present 'I want to go' is better. 'Euro' should be 'Europe'. 'I haven't choose 18' is incorrect; 'I haven't chosen yet' is correct. 'Purchase my master degree' should be 'pursue my master's degree'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.