Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like "must student" and "more better."

Ejemplo: I am currently a student. I recently completed my Bachelor of Pharmacy, which was a four-year course from 2014 to 2018. This degree has helped me gain valuable knowledge and skills to build a better career in the healthcare field.

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer clearer and more concise. Use correct expressions like "a stone's throw away" and avoid awkward phrasing. Provide specific reasons with linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I studied at Gujarat University, which is just a stone's throw away from my hometown. It is well reputed because it has highly qualified teachers and a supportive learning environment, which leads to positive results for students.

Sugerencia: Your answer is on the right track but needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a direct answer, then use linking words like "first and foremost" properly, and provide specific details about why it is a good place.

Ejemplo: Definitely, it is a good place to study for several reasons. First and foremost, the learning environment is very effective because many students are engaged and supported by highly qualified teachers.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words like "uh" and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the changes you want. Also, correct phrases like "grounds playgrounds" to "playgrounds."

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to make some changes to improve studying. First of all, I want to introduce a smart study system so that students can easily clear their doubts through practical methods. Apart from this, I would like to create playgrounds for physical fitness and social gatherings.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and repetitive. Provide a clear topic sentence and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to explain your plans and reasons clearly.

Ejemplo: My future study plans are to study abroad. In the coming years, I want to pursue a Master of Management with a specialization in healthcare, especially in New Zealand, so that I can develop practical skills and advance my career.

× Well, I must student.

✓ Well, I must be a student.

The modal verb 'must' requires the base form of the verb 'be' to form a correct sentence. 'Must student' is incorrect because 'student' is a noun and cannot directly follow 'must' without a linking verb. The correct form is 'must be a student.'

× I recently completed my Bachelor of Pharmacy which is off of four year from 2014 to 2018.

✓ I recently completed my Bachelor of Pharmacy, which is a four-year course from 2014 to 2018.

The phrase 'off of four year' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'a four-year course.' Also, a comma is needed before 'which' to introduce the relative clause. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I think that this study helps me a lot in order to make my career more better and I learned enormous things especially well qualified education.

✓ I think that this study helps me a lot to make my career better, and I have learned many things, especially a well-qualified education.

The phrase 'more better' is incorrect because 'better' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' is unnecessary. 'Enormous things' is vague; 'many things' is more appropriate. Also, 'well qualified education' should be 'a well-qualified education' to be grammatically correct.

× I studied in a renowned university which is a stone throw away from my hometown in the name of universities IK Gujarat University.

✓ I studied at a renowned university which is a stone's throw away from my hometown, named IK Gujarat University.

The correct preposition for institutions is 'at' not 'in.' The phrase 'a stone throw away' should be 'a stone's throw away.' Also, 'in the name of universities' is incorrect; it should be 'named' or 'called.'

× I think that is a well reputed for enormous reasons like it as well qualified teacher and better learning environment which makes positive outcomes.

✓ I think it is well reputed for many reasons, such as having well-qualified teachers and a better learning environment, which leads to positive outcomes.

'Well reputed' should be 'well reputed' without 'a.' 'Enormous reasons' is incorrect; 'many reasons' is appropriate. 'It as well qualified teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'having well-qualified teachers.' The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Definitely, I think that it is interesting place for study purpose for such a number of reasons.

✓ Definitely, I think that it is an interesting place for study purposes for several reasons.

The article 'an' is needed before 'interesting place.' 'Study purpose' should be plural 'study purposes.' 'Such a number of reasons' is awkward; 'several reasons' is more natural.

× First and foremost is that the learning environment is quite effective because the number of student engaged their interest with the assistance of highly qualified teachers.

✓ First and foremost, the learning environment is quite effective because a number of students engage their interest with the assistance of highly qualified teachers.

'The number of student' should be 'a number of students' to indicate plural. 'Engaged' should be 'engage' to match present tense. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and pluralization.

× Uh, yes, definitely I want to make some changes, uh, regarding study purposes.

✓ Uh, yes, definitely I would like to make some changes regarding study purposes.

Using 'would like to' is more polite and appropriate when expressing desires or intentions. 'I want to' is direct and less formal in this context.

× Uh, first of all, I want to introduce uh, smart, uh, study system so that students can easily clear their doubts with the help of practical things.

✓ First of all, I want to introduce a smart study system so that students can easily clear their doubts with the help of practical methods.

'Smart study system' needs an article 'a.' 'Practical things' is vague; 'practical methods' is clearer and more appropriate.

× Apart from this, I want to make uh, grounds playgrounds for the physical fitness as well as to reunite.

✓ Apart from this, I want to create grounds and playgrounds for physical fitness as well as for social gatherings.

'Grounds playgrounds' is redundant; 'grounds and playgrounds' is clearer. 'To reunite' is awkward; 'for social gatherings' better expresses the intended meaning.

× Well, my future study plans are quite interesting.

✓ Well, my future study plans are quite interesting.

This sentence is correct as it is; no correction needed.

× I want to study abroad and upcoming years I want to I want to study master of management with specialization in healthcare especially in New Zealand, so so that I can develop the practical skills not only.

✓ I want to study abroad in the upcoming years. I want to study for a Master of Management with a specialization in healthcare, especially in New Zealand, so that I can develop practical skills.

The sentence is fragmented and repetitive. 'Upcoming years' needs 'in the.' 'Study master of management' should be 'study for a Master of Management.' 'So so that' is redundant. The phrase 'not only' is incomplete and removed for clarity.