Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I am cannot enroll my knowledge' và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I am currently a student at Logan High School. I attend classes every day and usually study at home afterward. I enjoy this routine because it helps me improve my knowledge and create good memories with my friends.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp như 'there are because'. Hãy sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ejemplo: I study at Morgan's High School, a beautiful and historic school with a rich tradition. I enjoy it because the teachers are very supportive, and I have many good friends there.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'environmental where has'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc chính xác để thể hiện ý rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. My school has many modern facilities and a vibrant, friendly environment with supportive teachers and good friends.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về những thay đổi bạn muốn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like my school to make several changes. For example, I hope it becomes more modern and is equipped with better facilities like updated classrooms and sports equipment.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cụ thể về kế hoạch học tập tương lai của bạn.

Ejemplo: In the future, I plan to attend a prestigious university to improve my knowledge and develop myself. I also want to become a responsible and successful person.

× I really love this routine because I am cannot enroll my knowledge and create good memory with my friend.

✓ I really love this routine because I cannot enhance my knowledge and create good memories with my friends.

The phrase 'I am cannot' is incorrect; 'cannot' is a modal verb and should not be preceded by 'am'. Also, 'enroll my knowledge' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'enhance' or 'improve'. 'Memory' should be plural 'memories' when referring to multiple experiences. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context.

× I really enjoy being there because there are because the teachers are very supportive and I have many good friends.

✓ I really enjoy being there because the teachers are very supportive and I have many good friends.

The phrase 'there are because' is redundant and incorrect. The correct sentence removes 'there are because' to maintain clarity and grammatical correctness.

× My school has many modern facilities and vibrant and friendly environmental where has supportive teachers and good friends.

✓ My school has many modern facilities and a vibrant and friendly environment with supportive teachers and good friends.

The word 'environmental' is an adjective but should be the noun 'environment' here. Also, 'where has' is incorrect; it should be 'with' to connect the description properly.

× Yes, I would like the place where I study or to make a lots of changes.

✓ Yes, I would like the place where I study to make a lot of changes.

The phrase 'a lots of' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'a lot of'. Also, 'or to make' is incorrect in this context and should be removed.

× For example, I can see my school more and more modern and equipped with.

✓ For example, I would like to see my school become more modern and better equipped.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'More and more modern and equipped with' lacks an object after 'equipped with'. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning and completes the structure.

× In the resort and I want to get into a prestigious university indirect to improve my knowledge and enhance my myself.

✓ In the future, I want to get into a prestigious university to improve my knowledge and enhance myself.

The phrase 'In the resort' is incorrect; it should be 'In the future'. 'Indirect' is incorrect and should be 'in order to' or simply 'to'. 'Enhance my myself' is redundant; 'enhance myself' is correct.

× I want to become a good person and yeah.

✓ I want to become a good person.

The word 'yeah' is informal and unnecessary at the end of the sentence in this context. Removing it makes the sentence clearer and more formal.